Character Level Up Approvals


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jkason

First Post
Reviewing Menik:

Combat Stats:

1) You listed the Iron Liver save bonus, but not the Elf racial one. I added the note for consistency.

Feats:

2) Trip bonus for Toppling spell is +11 (lvl 6 + 5 ability). -fixed.

Skills:

2) Ability bonus for Craft was wrong. -fixed

3) Know: Arcana total was low by 1. - fixed.

Spell List (known):

4) Hrm. So, RAW, a wizard's spell book does NOT include the cantrips from his opposition schools, which in this case means Menik would have to pay to add Detect Magic (which I see he normally prepares). Our Creating a Character page says "Are not required to begin with all cantrips in their spellbooks (but may do so if they wish, of course)." Emphasis mine, which kind of makes it sound like we effectively houseruled it, but the Alternate Cantrip discussion makes clear mention of the exclusion in specialist spellbooks. I'm inclined to say Menik's grandfathered in with his current cantrips, though, given how many levels he's been working this way.

5) It's probably worth knowing that Menik's spell book only has 7 pages left in his current spellbook with the spells as listsed. He'll likely want to pick up a second book in the very near future.

Spell List (Prepared):

6) Selective should now exclude up to 5 creatures with Menik's current INT - fixed.

Adventure Log:

7) Adventure log didn't list final XP and GP totals from the most recent adventure. - fixed

Equipment / Finances:

8) For some reason, you had 50 gp more in consumed listed in your Finances section than in equipment. I went with the equipment number, since that's what the list of consumed items adds up to.


I'm going to throw a question to the General thread about the excluded cantrips, but I don't see a reason to hold up approval any more than it already is for a spell Menik can buy for next to nothing if it comes to it, so I'm going with APPROVED
 



jkason

First Post
Reviewing Maui:

Combat Stats:

1) You swapped Maui's base reflex and dex values in the Reflex calculation - fixed.

Maui Weapon Stats:

2) Dex mod was low on the sling stats. - fixed.

Wild Shape Stats:

3) Leopard & Deinonychus were missing the Pounce attack. - fixed

4) Deinonychus foreclaws are a secondary natural attack, so they take a -5 on the attack roll and only add 1/2 Maui's STR bonus. - fixed.

5) Dire Tiger AC total was right, but listed the wrong Dex mod in the breakdown - fixed.

Traits:

6) There's no mechanical effect, but technically, the save trait is called Resilient, not Capable. - fixed.

Equipment:

7) I changed the layout a bit, since some of the indenting made it look like most of Maui's worn magical items were in his Backpack, not being worn.

8) There's a difference of +1 Armor between a Hide Shirt and just plain Hide armor. Going by the AC calculation, weight, and the AC penalty you're listing in skills, I changed the listing to just plain Hide. It looks like Maui may have overspent on that, though. I come up with 15 + 150 MW +1000 magic = 1165 gp. I'm not sure where the extra 75 gp came from.

Adventure Log:

9) I fiddled with some of the treasure links to try to get them to open directly on the posts with the totals.



Take a look at your cost on the Hide Armor, but that's a small enough discrepency that I'm going to go ahead and APPROVE Maui for level 7.
 

Satin Knights

First Post
Reviewing Borric:
a) He has 62 skill points but spent 64. Needs fixing. It looks like the mistakes are in Ride and Intimidate.
b) You hadn't bumped the base HD field in the HP. Fixed.

NOT YET.
 

perrinmiller

Adventurer
Reviewing Borric:
a) He has 62 skill points but spent 64. Needs fixing. It looks like the mistakes are in Ride and Intimidate.
b) You hadn't bumped the base HD field in the HP. Fixed.

NOT YET.
Just removed one rank from each. Possibly I made a mistake as I was thinking things over on the skills, or it carried forward from previous levels. No matter, should be good now.
 

jbear

First Post
Thanks jkason,

I appreciate that.

I didn't quite understand the mistake I made with the armour. I had paid for the more expensive armor, but I was wearing the lighter version stat-wise? Is that right?

Cheers
J
 

jkason

First Post
Thanks jkason,

I appreciate that.

I didn't quite understand the mistake I made with the armour. I had paid for the more expensive armor, but I was wearing the lighter version stat-wise? Is that right?

Cheers
J

Hide is vaguely weird, in that the light version (Hide Shirt) costs more than the medium Hide armor. Shrug. But no matter which version you bought (20 gp base or 15 gp base), my math said you overspent a bit, unless I missed something. It's 75 gp, though, which at this point in Maui's career probably isn't especially significant. I just thought I'd point it out if you wanted to re-calcuate the cost of the armor. :)
 


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