Gorgon Zee
Hero
[MENTION=57112]
... I don't think that [OSR] is a literary endeavour, because it's not an artistic endeavour at all.
... extrapolating and building on a fiction within parameters of theme/interest/"meaningfulness" is not about quality of form
... the sorts of pacing issues ... is more about what to say when then how deftly one says it.
... [RPGs are] not about being an entertainer/performer, although hopefully the participants find it entertaining/enjoyable.
It strongly seems that you are starting from a premise that says RPGs are purely game and have no attributes that might be related to an artistic endeavor. I guess that's a point of view, but you shouldn't be surprised when most people have the experience that:
* OSR can be as much art as DramaSystem.
* Bad writing (the form of presentation) limits people's enjoyment.
* GMs who phrase descriptions well are more fun than ones who simply indicate bare facts.
* They like playing with people whose characters are performed rather than merely described.
I think you've made your position pretty clear, but honestly, I think you're way out on your own. I don't think anyone I know would be equally happy with a poorly delivered description read from box text as they would be from a well-delivered description with good phrasing, intonation and vocal variation.