D&D 5E Dancer in the sea of time: 5e statistics and lore for a homebrew mythic dragon goddess

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[dave2008]

Cool! Thank you for sharing and really awesome dragon deity. A few quick thoughts:

• The stat block is really long. I would recommend reducing it to is core a bit more. I know I just gave up reading everything after a bit (and I love epic monsters).
• Have you check the CR? The size of the stat block makes the CR seem low, but I haven't run the numbers. The HP and AC seem in the range (if a bit high) but the other defenses make me think the defensive CR is above 24 (closet to 26 I would guess). I haven't check the attack CR
• Bonus Actions typical go in the traits section, not the actions section.
• Remote communication and remote sensing are better left in the deity entry and not the stat block IMO. It would help make the stat block more user friendly. Some idea with ritual casting I would think. The stat block should primarily be for combat relevant abilities to keep it usable.

Also, would it be OK if a link to Rajara over in my 5e Mythic Monster Updates thread?

 

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[Just Passing Through]

Cool! Thank you for sharing and really awesome dragon deity. A few quick thoughts:

• The stat block is really long. I would recommend reducing it to is core a bit more. I know I just gave up reading everything after a bit (and I love epic monsters).
• Have you check the CR? The size of the stat block makes the CR seem low, but I haven't run the numbers. The HP and AC seem in the range (if a bit high) but the other defenses make me think the defensive CR is above 24 (closet to 26 I would guess). I haven't check the attack CR
• Bonus Actions typical go in the traits section, not the actions section.
• Remote communication and remote sensing are better left in the deity entry and not the stat block IMO. It would help make the stat block more user friendly. Some idea with ritual casting I would think. The stat block should primarily be for combat relevant abilities to keep it usable.

Also, would it be OK if a link to Rajara over in my 5e Mythic Monster Updates thread?

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[Marandahir]

Reminds me of the Dragon God of Time/Plane(t) AKA and his splinter deities (Akatosh, Auri-El, Alduin, Ruptga/Tall Papa, Satak-Akel/Satakal, etc) from The Elder Scrolls.