Celebrim
Legend
Most of my prep time is spent reading something like what your wrote there and transcribing that to my prep notes that read like:[
Steps 20 feet down, Dusty. Quiet.
DC 10 Investigation—-> Scratches.
I admit to liking that as a short note better than I like the stuff written with multiple fonts and parenthetical asides and out of natural language order. However, I also don't feel the advantage of your note is enough to make it worth the effort. My effort would probably be in adding more detail to that bare bones encounter because I hate bare rooms. You'll note even my short rewrite changed the encounter area a bit. The immediate note I see a need of is what is the source of the odor, since that is in a separate encounter area. (And if mildew is not in an adjacent encounter area, that's an oversight by the designer.)
But again, as you say, we have different things we like.