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    The Rune Writer Chapter 2 added

    Hey Eboe, You got another reader here. Hope this SH keeps on rolling. You're neatly avoiding cliches which is nice to see. The whole rune writer setup has got real potential. :) Spider.
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Hey buddy, Thanks for the encouragement! It's a very valid point that you've brought up. In my mind, what makes stories engaging are characters that change, be it through their own actions or have actions forced upon them. I could warble on about this topic, but in summary I think that...
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    Amidst the Ruins (Updated 6/22/06)

    Hey Anuel, good stuff so far. Looks like I'm lucky enough to start reading after the formatting-wars have died down. It reads great now (there are a few points where maybe you could give the dialogue a bit of breathing space rather than wedged into paragraphs... but hey, I'm being overly picky...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Ah, coming back to a question asked a few days ago... Well a Rogue's Thread did kick off... the link is HERE , so please go along and have a gander. It is under heavy construction at the moment. I'm adding in all the time, but for ease of all of us, here is Onyx: Onyx, modified Shield...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Cheers buddy. After testing the drow waters with Sliinith, it opened up a corkscrew of storyhooks for the future. I'll admit, they do get a little involved later on. Keep your eyes peeled for Prince Vaerun. One of my more unwholesome creations. :) Glad you're enjoying the SH! Anyway. Listen...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    My pleasure. And yup, Sliinith is a reoccuring little trouble maker/arm taker. Awww... he's so cute! I usually hate drow too. They get such a beating that this kiddo was just what I thought might bring them back up in my players eyes. No double swords or big cats around here, Just spiders and...
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    The Blade of Phoee (Updated 12/08/08)

    Hey buddy. Y'know, this SH is getting better and better. I would go into why, but if I put my finger on it then it could well be another of those creative-butterflies stamped out by my stumpy digits. Suffice to say I'm really impressed. Keep it up! Your eternal fan, Spider J
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    “An arm for an arm.” Thalin stood under the ice. His hair lay thick on his head as he gazed up at the dripping funnels that hung above him. The bowels of the castle were absolutely silent. His father could be looking for him but Thalin didn’t care. This was his place. It was his sanctuary where...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Thanks Palskane, these few chapters that we are knee deep in have been quite tough to write up, but onwards and upwards. Your support really helps! Well well. Happy Birthday Funeris! (spider brings in a cobweb-encrusted cake) Of course I can delay the next post, in fact I've gone back over it...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    You would not believe the week I've just had. Seriously. One of those aligning-of-the-planets moments. But... that has passed and now I can get back on with this. (drumroll)...... Update tomorrow! Spider.
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Interlude Number Eight: A Tale of Servitude Gruulth strode through the gatehouse, the inky night greeting him as he left Ilinvur town. Onyx crouched motionless, its eyes, all of them, trained on the long hawk-like walk of the necromancer. Both fit easily into the sickly moonlight. Gruulth came...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    no problem, so see you soon. :) i spider give you my sympathy. I don't get how people can kill computers so quickly - it's a mystery. sigh. Well, update coming soon! spider
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    The Blade of Phoee (Updated 12/08/08)

    Funeris! Sweet stuff buddy (as always). I've finally caught back up - give me a warning next time you unleash that amount of material! 2 things: Great writing. The darker the better for me, so as the rest faint and swoon I'm rubbing my hands together. ;) End-Bringer (adding my voice to the...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Hey guys. Wellll..... maybe. It was time for a bit of a psychological scare to the characters. And what better than little drow with bags of spiders? Will do. Might take a wee while, but it will surface. My pleasure. Remember to keep nagging me on writing style! Thanks Oaxacan, glad to have...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Hey Ashy! Good to see you about again. Damn those censorship vagabonds. Sure, I'll set about mocking up a pdf - hell, I can throw in something that I've been wanting to post for a while. A Cast of Thousands is a list of places, people, battle sites and events that appear in the SH, so good...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    man oh man. I love a pivot. Well, I'm reading through your SH as I type (though I'm hungry so that won't last for too much longer)... nice to see you're a Vonnegut fan. Me too. I have rated Slaughterhouse5 as my favourite read for quite a few years now. sigh. Ah well, all posts must come to...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Okay. Here we go... [edit]Actually, hold on. Before going into answer mode, I'll explain. Canada was lovely, then I was secreted away in a few different locations once i got back. I only managed to get back yesterday, reeled from the number of replies, believing it to be a computer fault and...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour Chapter 12: …And into the Fire "I've been waiting for this" The circle of guards constricted. Thalin felt a bolt catch against his robe and he spun to face the guard. Droplets of ice dripped from the mage’s hand as he snarled in anger. Both Dariel and Isplit...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    I'm back. I'm angry. I'm very quick and very nervous because of too many coffees. But most of all I'm angry. I'll tell you why. But first...
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    A Chronicle of Ice, Luck and Honour - updated 19th December

    Thank you Funeris! Yes I'm a lucky chap. Currently knocking around Toronto, basking in the sun (makes a change to Edinburgh, let me tell you) - watching the bluejays and doing all sorts. Hell, I'm not going to write out a travel account, suffice to say I'm haing a great time (on holiday with...
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