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There was a AD&D comic, feating a thief called "Fineous Fingers" which featured many of the DnD stero types. The most musing of which was the party stading behind Fin, whil he listened at the door. Across the hall was a second door. The other door opens, unbeknowst the the party, intent of...

*bump* (I can't believe I'm bumping my own lazzzzzy butt) edit: I wonder if edditing couts as a *BUMP*: answer...Nope

REALLY looking forward to Wicht vs. Mirthcard Mirthcard - excellent job, I have to say! Including good exposition.

KD: FWIW, I though that the concept of having the ingredients disperesed over time, to become a cohesive story thread later was inventive! It can be difficult to expres in a tight knit adventur epackage though. Now that the round is over: Can I get a critique on my attempt at this set of...

Imhotepthewise: Wow - what a difference! I will post a seasong vs. Imhotepthewise critique! You both deserve as much for putting in the effort ...well, at least you deserve it, Seasong seems to type 13,456 word per minute (all spelled correctly), and has soome time to burn!

Heh. I am glad to hear that. It's nice when pro's pat my stuff on the head. The other thing I am really proud of though, is that no stupid spell breaks the scenario. That is a BIG problem with many adventures. (IMHO). ...and you know you're biased againt those Bird feather tokens, right...

Hey there, cowboy, my quote lines are missing!

Uh-oh! Classic player over confidence. Spelled up and thinking they were "da-man" G, M, and A, are about to achive a 1st class ass-whuppin' I'll bet... O, O, O - question about spell casting fatigue. does a 1 always fail on this check? I like this story hour, I do. I wish my players didn't...

Imhotepthewise and Seasong: not the current match up, becasue I don't really agree with the less is more approach. Although everyone need not be as much of a boor as I am, I like meat (more words) to work with... Imhotepthewise: for example: you neglect to include plot hooks, and what level the...

exposition Of the six, that stupid ingredient simulacrum was the hardest for me to deal with. Although it's rich in flavor, it just never semed to want to fit into my scenario. I bandied about the idea or having the Naga create a simulacrum of himself, instead of the "angels," but he is...

Whew! Those critiques always rip me up inside! Yikes! Still, 4 out of 6 stars ain't bad, coming from seasong. ..and about my spelling: I typed the thing in MS word, for the love of glub! Blame the corporate spell checker, not the bad speller (yeah! that's the ticket!) ..and where are my...

KD: C'mon - 500 is like, unreasonably short. I'm sure, sure, sure that 2,500 well written words will keep anyone's attention (it kept mine)... Now go read my story, dammit!

Whew! Just had to put in a quick "how you like me now!?" over at the home game. One of the reasons Your's Truly does not write IRON DM submissios it that I am too wordy. My last word count was ~10,000 - just a tad over Nemm's recommened 500 ;) The submissions over there are worth a read if...

Holiday IronDM Sharlizze’s Angels (an adventure for PC’s level 8-10) Ingrdients: Dwarven bandits Women’s clothing Ancient Monk Naga Scroll of Miracle Simulacrum Synopsis: This adventure is more of a social/political “who dun it?” than a combat heavy slugfest. The players must find and...

The beauty that is Cleave rears hit's head in yet another story hour. Go Athan! (you big brute). I'm waiting for Greppa to bust out the unarmed attacks. Hooowhaaaa! (we call him Greppa-Li, jokes Athan) Oh, and seasong, not to rain on the parade, but the dragon can't breath and land and...

I can't wait for a pregnant Jhanira and Nathe get into a hair pulling, eye scrathing contest over who Taran Loves "best" Or better yet, move Nathe to the demi-plane of "screw you father over with accelarated child maturing" and have Taran face a young mouthy drow version of himself... ..and...

Now seasong, ole seasong - here we have a perfectly good dragon attack, which could've set our heroes free, and you've gone and set them free already... ...sigh... Still, the horrific carnage a dragon can cause warms my old heart...None of those orcs had imporved evasion and rolled a "20" on...

c'mon - the anticipation was 1/2 the fun! You think my critiques took that long to write? :D (actually they did...)

(mouth moves) "very well, seasong-san!" (mouth moves) "you, have thrown down the gauntlet! And I... (mouth moves) "...Incognito-san, will write up a IRONDM post tonight, while the moon is full and my ki is at it's peak!" (mouth finishes moving) ...errr, seasong: of course you realize...

Hey arwink: this is THE BEST reason for designing a trap around a magic item - detesting those who love the munchy item in question...and now, off to punish my players with with a wide variety of cursed, but useful magic items...like Boots of Speed that literally inject you with methaphetamine :-)