A visual aid for my first D20 Future Game (test)

[prcrash]

I am planning on starting a campaign with my gaming group (actually my wife and son) and I've made a few visual aids in the for of animations that I plan on burning to DVD so that I can select them through a menu in my DVD player. Here's an image of the Jumpgate sequence (still early -- not completely done yet...)

any thoughts? critiques?

 

[Turanil]

Adding colors and textures to the objects would improve the image. The gate seems to allow only small-sized starships (the one coming looks like a small starfighter).

 

[Piratecat]

I saw it and my first thought was: "Ooh, cool shark."

 

[Cergorach]

Very kewl, looks like a huge maw, asif space travel wasn't scarry enough...