Thanks for sharing!So, having run it with some modifications (I posted my PDF somewhere on this site), here's my take...
I am running it basically as written for my kids, who are 6 and 9, but simplifying when needed.
I am planning to run it for my regular group of grown ups. For them, I'm going to modify the adventure more-or-less the same as you did.
I think it's a great framework that can be kept simple or made more complex depending upon what you want out of it.

