It does, thanks. I'm planning on 4 levels of Monk and going fighter with the rest, and may end up not even taking the Archer archetype - just gotta do a little looking ahead to see. In that case,
crunch is ready for review as-is on the OP site. I'll get some fluff up this weekend when I've got a little more time to think about it, but basically he'll be a Shaonti who was taken in by a Szarni family (hence the campaign trait). I'll need to adjust his age upwards a little to account for all of his life events. I'm actually planning on moving him from LN into NG as the campaign progresses, if I can find a way to support that with the IC drama. Even though he's got a shortbow currently, his specialization will be longbow. Monks just don't get enough starting gold to buy one

. I'll have to figure out how to get one IC.
EDIT: Reconsidering Rapid Shot as a first level feat - will likely take something else. Between that and the starting age, please hold off for a bit on review. I'll probably get him completed this evening.