Sorry if I offended, but I'm just not the consumer I used to be. Like I said, you seem to have a flair for characterization. And you could see how long the two had known each other by the way their interactions rolled out. It reminded me of when my brother and his friends used to work on their cars out in our front lot: a lot of extraneous stuff going, on, but basically they were all about the task at hand. Description was at the minimum, but you could still see it all, because the action and the dialogue carried the whole scene. It's really quite good.
I write too, but I have never published anything. My best thing, I think, is poetry, which I can usually see the end of from where I start, so I end up finishing almost all of it. I have two novels working, right now, but I've been "working" on one of them since I was 18, about 23 years ago. The second is just in it's infancy, and I started about 4 days ago as a result of NaNoWriMo. I am about 6000 words in, and it looks pretty interesting.
Anyway, is this latest of your books only available via download, Or can I get it at Barnes and Noble or Books A Million? Your characters have made me curious about the story.