Carnifex
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Henry said:
Truly perfect timing for that article to be dug back out again, nicely done Henry!

Henry said:
WizarDru said:However, I can't comment on his products. I opened 'Rings of Power' and 'Swords of Power', flush with cash ready to burn. I saw huge fonts, I saw scant content, and I saw items that appeared unbalanced in a cursory glance.
and then proceeds to make numerous grammar and proofreading mistakes in his column. First of all, in the quote above, shouldn't that be "are" instead of "is," as there are two subjects in the sentence?Grammar and proof reading in a critic is almost as important as their review.
Surely that should be a question mark at the end of that sentence, no?How many game critics does it take to change a light bulb.
You mean "it's" there, Jim - that would be a contraction of "it is."When a reviewer makes general statements its usually because they have nothing substantive to say.
Well, you got the question mark in there this time, but it should be "reader's" - note the apostrophe, it's a possessive.Did the art increase the readers enjoyment of the concepts in the book?
Ghostwind said:
If it comes across like a college calculus textbook to a non-math major and has issues with the game mechanics, then one should expect a less than favorable review.
Richards said:First of all, in the quote above, shouldn't that be "are" instead of "is," as there are two subjects in the sentence?
Grammar and proof reading in a critic is almost as important as their review.