Tewligan
First Post
Okay, I've promised to run a Call of Cthulhu adventure for my gaming group sometime before I move this summer, and I've finally settled on an idea for it that I like. Problem is, the idea currently isn't much more than a basic concept, along with a couple of images I find (un)appealing. Anyway, here's what I've got so far:
PREMISE: About 14 years ago, Farmer Thompson was plowing his fields, and had to pull up a big boulder/tree stump/something. Underneath, he found what looked like a huge cocoon of some sort. It started to writhe and pulsate when exposed to the sunlight, and he was just about to smash it with his hoe when, inexplicably, a baby girl crawled out of it. Instead of turning the child over to the authorities, Thompson and his wife decided to raise the child, telling townsfolk that they had adopted the daughter of a distant family member who was unable to care for her own child. I'm not positive why they decide to keep a child from such odd circumstances - it's either because they were unable to have children themselves and were desperate, or maybe she had some low-grade psychic power that influences people to care for it while it's weak. Anyway, she grows up as a normal human child, if perhaps a little cold and distant. Normal, that is, until...
THE PRESENT DAY: The adopted daughter has hit puberty, and starts becoming less and less human. She's begun to kill and eat local animals - stray pets, livestock, and eventually people. She also feels the need to reproduce. She begins dating a local boy, and of course kills and eats him once she's impregnated. Investigators will ideally find out what's going on in this small town, and put an end to things.
That's the rough idea, anyway. The image that makes me want to run this is when the investigators figure out the source of the town's troubles, make their way into the Thompson's house, and break into the (heavily padlocked) cellar. When they make their way downstairs, the air reeks of rotting meat. The bare concrete floor is scattered with the gnawed bones and offal of children and animals. In the corner is the daughter. Now barely recognizable as human, she sits huge and bloated, black eyes staring at the investigators while her mandibles chatter furiously. She sits on an enormous egg sac, which starts to move and split open as she becomes agitated. The whole room is lit by a bare bulb at the bottom of the stairs - your typical unfinished basement.
Anyway, that's what I've got so far. What I need is ideas to get from 14 years ago to the investigators going down those stairs. I've got a few ideas and odd bits and clues, such as:
* Noone being able to verify the supposed birth mother when the girl was adopted.
* If the investigators meet the girl before she gets locked away and changes too much, they may notice some heavy bruising on her face. They may suspect child abuse, but it's actually from the skin being badly bruised when she dislocates her jaw to eat something fairly large like a dog or a toddler.
* An empty dog house at the Thompson place, but no dog (the girl killed it recently)
* An empty wheelchair at the Thompson place (she used it for a while at the beginning of her change, before she became too horrible)
* The adoptive parents quickly going insane from guilt and horror.
They know what's happening, but have no idea why or what to do. They've finally locked their daughter in the basement, but don't have the heart to contact the authorities or put an end to things. They may have even started supplying human flesh for her.
So, that's pretty much all I have so far. Criticism? Ideas? I'll take any input you care to give. This is my first time running CoC, and I'm hoping to make it horrifying and, well, not stupid.
PREMISE: About 14 years ago, Farmer Thompson was plowing his fields, and had to pull up a big boulder/tree stump/something. Underneath, he found what looked like a huge cocoon of some sort. It started to writhe and pulsate when exposed to the sunlight, and he was just about to smash it with his hoe when, inexplicably, a baby girl crawled out of it. Instead of turning the child over to the authorities, Thompson and his wife decided to raise the child, telling townsfolk that they had adopted the daughter of a distant family member who was unable to care for her own child. I'm not positive why they decide to keep a child from such odd circumstances - it's either because they were unable to have children themselves and were desperate, or maybe she had some low-grade psychic power that influences people to care for it while it's weak. Anyway, she grows up as a normal human child, if perhaps a little cold and distant. Normal, that is, until...
THE PRESENT DAY: The adopted daughter has hit puberty, and starts becoming less and less human. She's begun to kill and eat local animals - stray pets, livestock, and eventually people. She also feels the need to reproduce. She begins dating a local boy, and of course kills and eats him once she's impregnated. Investigators will ideally find out what's going on in this small town, and put an end to things.
That's the rough idea, anyway. The image that makes me want to run this is when the investigators figure out the source of the town's troubles, make their way into the Thompson's house, and break into the (heavily padlocked) cellar. When they make their way downstairs, the air reeks of rotting meat. The bare concrete floor is scattered with the gnawed bones and offal of children and animals. In the corner is the daughter. Now barely recognizable as human, she sits huge and bloated, black eyes staring at the investigators while her mandibles chatter furiously. She sits on an enormous egg sac, which starts to move and split open as she becomes agitated. The whole room is lit by a bare bulb at the bottom of the stairs - your typical unfinished basement.
Anyway, that's what I've got so far. What I need is ideas to get from 14 years ago to the investigators going down those stairs. I've got a few ideas and odd bits and clues, such as:
* Noone being able to verify the supposed birth mother when the girl was adopted.
* If the investigators meet the girl before she gets locked away and changes too much, they may notice some heavy bruising on her face. They may suspect child abuse, but it's actually from the skin being badly bruised when she dislocates her jaw to eat something fairly large like a dog or a toddler.
* An empty dog house at the Thompson place, but no dog (the girl killed it recently)
* An empty wheelchair at the Thompson place (she used it for a while at the beginning of her change, before she became too horrible)
* The adoptive parents quickly going insane from guilt and horror.
They know what's happening, but have no idea why or what to do. They've finally locked their daughter in the basement, but don't have the heart to contact the authorities or put an end to things. They may have even started supplying human flesh for her.
So, that's pretty much all I have so far. Criticism? Ideas? I'll take any input you care to give. This is my first time running CoC, and I'm hoping to make it horrifying and, well, not stupid.