Can I get a critique of my game?

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http://www.twitch.tv/rpglory/v/22468753

Where you can watch our happy little party flail helplessly with slow .pdf load times. .

 

[pickin_grinnin]

How about just putting it on Google Docs?

 

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How about just putting it on Google Docs?

sorry, do you mean the character sheets?

 

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Dark Revelations - Actual Play with the Creators - the Betrothal or Ruin - part 2 - The Game Begins
http://www.twitch.tv/rpglory/v/23588992

What happens when a Minotaur Faustian Mechanic, A Feylin Magister, a Verkhail Brute and a Dwavern Troubleshooter go on a quest to rescue "Princess?" The answer is hilarity.


Dark Revelations - Actual Play with the Creators - the Betrothal or Ruin - part 3 - Bouncy Flatulence
http://www.twitch.tv/rpglory/v/24799761
Our heroes find out the horrors of flatulence as they transverse the ruins of Philadelphia.

 

[pickin_grinnin]

sorry, do you mean the character sheets?

Sorry, I meant Google Drive.

 

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hmm I have them there for closed testing.

I think I can open it up as an alternative aggregate.

 

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http://drevrpg.blogspot.ca/p/google-drive-downloads.html

As requested, I've uploaded the books to google drive for hopefully easier access.

 

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Dark Revelations - Actual Play with the Creators - the Betrothal or Ruin - part 5 - Phone Boxes and Flashing Lights

http://www.twitch.tv/rpglory/v/27228144

Our Heroes have found the Princess and like all great heroes, they are trying to get her back home.

WARNING: Trigger warning at the end.

 

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Dark Revelations - Actual Play with the Creators - the Betrothal or Ruin - part 6 - Art for Art's Sake
http://www.twitch.tv/rpglory/b/684168391

Our epic series completes it's first part of the adventure fighting art.

We'll pick it up in january

 

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http://drevrpg.blogspot.ca/2015/12/the-betrothal-of-ruin-module.html

I put the module we used online including npcs.