There's just one flaw I see: your character is not shallow by most cultures' standards. Incredibly steadfast irrational loyalty while unwise in the eyes of our culture is profoundly heroic. I think that D&D is buying into a holy grail quest idea of wisdom in its rules; your character seems like Parzifal -- he was unintelligent and irrationally dedicated to a quest he didn't understand. But not unwise. Your guy doesn't seem like someone with a really low will save, especially susceptible to enchantment spells like Charm Person.
So, I think you might want to re-evaluate whether that low stat goes into Intelligence or Wisdom. Of course, putting it in Int wouldn't get precisely the guy you want either...
So, I think you might want to re-evaluate whether that low stat goes into Intelligence or Wisdom. Of course, putting it in Int wouldn't get precisely the guy you want either...


