Character Submission Thread

[Satin Knights]

Since I got a moment, I started looking at these new characters.

Hawk (Tailspinner): NOT YET
Well, I hit something major. You have only spent 18 of your 20 build points. There are several different ways you could spend those last two points, so I am stopping there, and letting you finish it out.

Alec Morgan (BokaliMali): APPROVED
a) I renamed the wiki page, because our PCs have the player name in them, and NPCs don't. The convention makes it easier chasing down who owns what.
b) An alchemist who is not trained at all in Craft Alchemy? This bugs me a tad bit. Especially since his father is an alchemist, as is his grandfather and so on. So, please move one skill point over into Craft Alchemy. It is not mandatory, but it would make me feel better.
c) I did a little OCD cleanup, but not much.

 

[Guest 11456]

Hawk (Tailspinner): NOT YET
Well, I hit something major. You have only spent 18 of your 20 build points. There are several different ways you could spend those last two points, so I am stopping there, and letting you finish it out.

10 + 13 + 5 - 4 + 0 - 4 = 20

 

[perrinmiller]

I found I was able to resume using the Wiki again at work. I managed to stamp Cruendithas Beestinger the Treasure Hunter with judge APPROVAL.

 

[Satin Knights]

10 + 13 + 5 - 4 + 0 - 4 = 20

I thought those mushrooms tasted funny. But the purple bunny kept saying the answer was 18. He was rather adamant about it.

Hawk: APPROVED
a) I would prefer to see a different pic than the iconic for the class.
b) While legal, I hate characters that only carry a weapon and armor. She is vulnerable to swarms. A grapple makes her 2 handed weapon useless. Foraging for food, she will fail 30% of the time, leaving her fatigued from hunger for the next day, which is bad for a barbarian. Have you ever tried to skin a rabbit with a greatsword? It gets kind of messy. And if an archer pins you down, it gets rather hopeless as well.

The good news is you just got a retainer to fix that with, and time to go shopping.

 

[Satin Knights]

Looking over Wahyu:
a) The Magical Talent gives you a cantrip as a once a day SLA, not as a full use cantrip. Two-World Magic is an approved trait that fully converts the cantrip into a usable orison, but it only puts it on your available list. So, you would have to spend one of the four cantrip slots on it to take it.
b) I removed the empty shield line in the inventory.
c) I specifically added the racial modifiers in the abilities section.

Advice: Without spellcraft, you can tell something is magical, but you have to take it to someone else and pay them gold to identify things. Spending at least one point in it is wise.

You can switch the traits in order to get a full use cantrip instead of a 1/day version, but that would mean dropping one of the orisons for now.

Wahyu is APPROVED.

 

[Guest 11456]

I thought those mushrooms tasted funny. But the purple bunny kept saying the answer was 18. He was rather adamant about it.

Hawk: APPROVED
a) I would prefer to see a different pic than the iconic for the class.
b) While legal, I hate characters that only carry a weapon and armor. She is vulnerable to swarms. A grapple makes her 2 handed weapon useless. Foraging for food, she will fail 30% of the time, leaving her fatigued from hunger for the next day, which is bad for a barbarian. Have you ever tried to skin a rabbit with a greatsword? It gets kind of messy. And if an archer pins you down, it gets rather hopeless as well.

The good news is you just got a retainer to fix that with, and time to go shopping.

A crossbow for range, a couple of daggers for close combat and a backpack to hold it for now.

If and when I survive this one I can look into something for swarm control.

RE: The pic, I never found any guidelines on choosing character pics, so I just looked for one that fit the bill.

 

[Satin Knights]

RE: The Pic: I coordinated local PFS for a couple years. Using that pic just feels like you are using a pre-gen. That is the flavor that it is giving me. Red Sonya, leaper, and claymore are just a few possibilities.

 

[Commander_Fallout]

Looking over Wahyu:
a) The Magical Talent gives you a cantrip as a once a day SLA, not as a full use cantrip. Two-World Magic is an approved trait that fully converts the cantrip into a usable orison, but it only puts it on your available list. So, you would have to spend one of the four cantrip slots on it to take it.
b) I removed the empty shield line in the inventory.
c) I specifically added the racial modifiers in the abilities section.

Advice: Without spellcraft, you can tell something is magical, but you have to take it to someone else and pay them gold to identify things. Spending at least one point in it is wise.

You can switch the traits in order to get a full use cantrip instead of a 1/day version, but that would mean dropping one of the orisons for now.

Wahyu is APPROVED.

a) Yeah, that works out even better. I honestly only chose it because I didn't know what else to go with. Thanks.

 

[Systole]

RE: The pic, I never found any guidelines on choosing character pics, so I just looked for one that fit the bill.

There aren't any official guidelines, but you're making a character that's going to be with you for a long time, so you're best off picking one with some personality.

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[Deuce Traveler]

Dunkel Metzgerei, Dwarven Cleric 1, submitted for approval sirs.

http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/"Dunkel_Metzgerei_(Deuce_Traveler)"

Can someone fix the quotes, though?