Character Submission Thread

[Satin Knights]

Short and simple answers:
Jaggo is fully APPROVED now for play.
Leira Olren is fully APPROVED now for play.
Brandon the Swift is fully APPROVED now for play.

Adding Dunkel is fully APPROVED as well.

 

[epicbob]

Excellent!

*Air guitar riff*

 

[Anastrace]

Whoo! Time to break some boards with my head, and spin kick something.

 

[Lindeloef]

Here is my 2nd Character. I am pretty sure I forgot something.

 

[Satin Knights]

Reviewing Karra:
a) I marked the Katana as one-handed, because otherwise I wanted to bump the damage to that of a two-handed weapon.
b) The magus gets 3 + INT first level spells in her spellbook to start. So, she has 4 more spells to choose.
c) The wrong number from inventory was copied in to the finance table. (had the weight in there) fixed.

Close, but NOT YET. She needs a few more spells.

 

[Lindeloef]

Thanks SK, updated the Spellbook

 

[Satin Knights]

That works. Okay. Karra has her first APPROVAL of two. Please put in at least one post in the DWI as an introduction for her, and then you can look at joining the "The Road to Tritower" game.

One approval is enough to get the "ball rolling" and get you into the DWI and games. Aura will probably get to your second approval rather quickly, as it is her game.

 

[Aura]

This is a very quick once over of Karra:

* I only found one mechanical problem: Unless I'm missing how she would accomplish this, she cannot take Fly as a skill. In order to do that, you have to have access to some source of flight every day. You'll want to reallocate the point in that skill to something else.
* Other than that, everything seems in order. SK obviously pointed out some issues already, which have been since fixed. Everything I totaled up by hand matched what you had.
* I don't have much experience with the magus, but I see you have a basic damage-dealing touch spells. Touch spells are pretty bread and butter for them.

NOT YET, but close.

 

[Lindeloef]

This is a very quick once over of Karra:

* I only found one mechanical problem: Unless I'm missing how she would accomplish this, she cannot take Fly as a skill. In order to do that, you have to have access to some source of flight every day. You'll want to reallocate the point in that skill to something else.

Ah you are right, I haven't read the requirement, fixed it.

 

[Aura]

Second Look: Karra

Everything looks to be in order here.

STAMP! Karra is APPROVED for play in LPF. Congratulations.

The Road to Tritower is recruiting, and one of the recruiting NPC's (Anton) is standing at the door between the main room of the DWI and the meeting room. Feel free to introduce yourself and get his attention.

(And thanks for SK for providing a quick stamp to get us to two so quickly.)