FrancisJohn
Explorer
Hey @Deepthought! Here is my non-judge character review punch list:
1. Maybe lose bulleted instructions for each section.
2. Fix the DEX mod in initiative
3. Clean up the BAB section. Maybe instead of class 1 and 2 just list bard.
4. Clean up the misc and trait bonus in Fortitude
5. What is the special in longsword?
6. List the range in the shortbow.
7. What are your two favored classes?
8. Typo in your proficiencies
9. Expand your descriptions in class abilities.
10. Maybe start a new section for bardic performances
11. Work on the knowledges. Add your bardic boost and your INT
12. For Bluff, I think you need to take a rank in order to trigger the +3 from a class skill
13. Don't know if you need a separate section for prepared spells, but list somewhere how many you cast per day.
14. I got a wrong gold total, and maybe check the formatting. I got different values for the belt pouch too.
15. Also got wrong weight for the arrows, and my weight calculation didn't match yours.
16. Maybe add the summary of your choices in level 1 to the level up section at the bottom.
17. We can always add more details and expand upon the character background.
18. I am a fan of putting the details and background at the top of the sheet.
Most things are correct, this is just me being overly picky. There are few things that definitely need to be fixed before approval. If you are feeling ambitious, you can try and copy some formatting ideas from http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Francis_John_IV_(FrancisJohn)
Status: Not Approved
1. Maybe lose bulleted instructions for each section.
2. Fix the DEX mod in initiative
3. Clean up the BAB section. Maybe instead of class 1 and 2 just list bard.
4. Clean up the misc and trait bonus in Fortitude
5. What is the special in longsword?
6. List the range in the shortbow.
7. What are your two favored classes?
8. Typo in your proficiencies
9. Expand your descriptions in class abilities.
10. Maybe start a new section for bardic performances
11. Work on the knowledges. Add your bardic boost and your INT
12. For Bluff, I think you need to take a rank in order to trigger the +3 from a class skill
13. Don't know if you need a separate section for prepared spells, but list somewhere how many you cast per day.
14. I got a wrong gold total, and maybe check the formatting. I got different values for the belt pouch too.
15. Also got wrong weight for the arrows, and my weight calculation didn't match yours.
16. Maybe add the summary of your choices in level 1 to the level up section at the bottom.
17. We can always add more details and expand upon the character background.
18. I am a fan of putting the details and background at the top of the sheet.
Most things are correct, this is just me being overly picky. There are few things that definitely need to be fixed before approval. If you are feeling ambitious, you can try and copy some formatting ideas from http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Francis_John_IV_(FrancisJohn)
Status: Not Approved
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