Your tactics look good to me!
And I think the sample lizardfolk looks fine. Do you want a description and background for the template and sample? I'm inclined to skip for the sample at least.
So are we skipping the Description and Background for the powered lizardfolk, right?
I'd be OK having some of the SRD text:
A tailed reptilian humanoid the height of a tall human.
A lizardfolk is usually 6 to 7 feet tall with green, gray, or brown scales and a tail 3 to 4 feet long. They can weigh 200 to 250 pounds.
Lizardfolk speak Draconic.
Oh, and I realized there's some grammatical errors in the current version's Tactics:
A powered lizardfolk are even less organized but occasionally attack in small groups with their powered or non-powered kinfolk. They generally attack in a frothing frenzy of claws and teeth. A powered lizardfolk usually doesn't bother carrying a shield, and those that do often forget to use them. They prefer to wield their clubs two-handed.
It should either be:
Tactics #2
A powered lizardfolk is even less organized but occasionally attacks in small groups with its powered or non-powered kinfolk. They generally attack in a frothing frenzy of claws and teeth. A powered lizardfolk usually doesn't bother carrying a shield, and those that do often forget to use them. They prefer to wield their clubs two-handed.
Or (more consistently with the SRD lizardfolk Tactics) use an all plural presentation.
How about:
Tactics #3
Powered lizardfolk are even less organized but occasionally fight in small groups with powered or non-powered kinfolk; they generally attack in a frothing frenzy of claws and teeth. Powered lizardfolk usually don't bother carrying shields, and those that do often forget to use them. They prefer to wield their clubs two-handed.
I like the version
#3 better. Shall I put it in the Working Draft?