Converting original D&D and Mystara monsters

[freyar]

"Pungency" is ok. I would agree with a range limit. Does that 100 ft range work for you?

Could you write a proposed Net entry?

 

[Cleon]

"Pungency" is ok. I would agree with a range limit. Does that 100 ft range work for you?

How's this:

Pungency (Ex): A bielgorad exudes a strong noxious stink. All creatures with a sense of smell within 100 feet of a bielgorad can make free Spot checks (DC 5 plus 1 per 10 feet of distance) to notice the odor. Creatures with bonuses to scent-based skill checks, such as wolves' +4 racial bonus on Survival checks when tracking by scent, can add that bonus to the Spot check. Creatures unfamiliar with bielgorad can identify the smell with a DC 20 Knowledge (the Planes) check.
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Could you write a proposed Net entry?

Sure.

Immobilizing Net (Su): Every bielgorad carries a special enchanted net. If a creature dazed by a bielgorad's shepherd's crook is dropped into the immobilizing net held by another bielgorad (a standard action by the crook-wielding bielgorad and a readied action by the net-holding bielgorad), the creature must succeed at a DC 18 Will saving throw or be dazed for as long as it remains wrapped in the net and within 10 feet of the bielgorad who held it. An Immobilizing net cannot be used as an Exotic Throwing Weapons like a normal combat net. The save DC is Charisma-based and includes a +4 enhancement bonus.
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Or maybe:

Immobilizing Net #2 (Su): Every bielgorad carries a special enchanted net. If a creature dazed by a bielgorad's shepherd's crook is dropped into the immobilizing net held by another bielgorad (a standard action by the crook-wielding bielgorad and a readied action by the net-holding bielgorad), the creature must succeed at a DC 18 Will saving throw or be dazed for as long as it remains wrapped in the net and within 10 feet of the bielgorad who held it. An Immobilizing net cannot be used as an Exotic Throwing Weapons like a normal combat net. An allt can free a creature trapped in an immobilizing net as a standard action, ending the daze. The save DC is Charisma-based and includes a +4 enhancement bonus.
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[freyar]

That Pungency is ok.
I also like the first version of the Immobilizing Net. I have to confess that I am puzzled by the "allt" in Net #2. I can't find a reference to that monster anywhere (or an "alit" or "allit" except as a mis-spelling of "allip"). But is the intent that an ability similar to freedom of movement should free the victim?