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Character Sheet :
[sblock]CHARACTER NAME : Ecks
RACE : Human
AGE : 27
CLASS (LEVEL) : Dedicated 5/Investigator 1
... NET LEVEL : 6
SPEED : 30 ft.
EXPERIENCE : 15,000 xp
REPUTATION : 0
OCCUPATION : Law Enforcement
PROGRESSION
HD 1 : Dedicated
HD 2 : Dedicated
HD 3 : Dedicated
HD 4 : Dedicated
HD 5 : Dedicated
HD 6 : Investogator
ABILITY SCORES
Str 12 (+1) (12/base) [4p]
Dex 15 (+2) (15/base) [8p]
Con 13 (+1) (13/base) [5p]
Int 12 (+0) (11/base 1/levels) [3p]
Wis 16 (+3) (16/base) [10p]
Cha 10 (+0) (10/base) [2p]
SAVES
Fortitude +4 (3/base 1/con)
Reflex +2 (2/base 2/Dex)
Will +7 (4/base 3/Wis)
COMBAT STATS
Initiative +2 (2/Dex)
Attack +3
Ranged +5 (3/base 2/dex)
Melee +4 (3/base 1/str)
Defense 16 (10/base 4/class 2/dex)
Touch 16
Flatfoot 14
Hit Points 28
CLASS FEATURES
Dedicated Hero:
Skill Emphasis – Gather Information
Aware
Cool Under Pressure – Gather Information, Investigate, Listen, Search, Sense Motive, Spot
Investogator:
Profile
FEATS
Alertness, Attentive, Dodge, Brawl, Low Profile, Simple Weapon Proficiency, Trustworthy, Personal Fireamrs Proficiency
SKILLS
Balance +3 (2/dex 1/rank)
Climb +2 (1/str 1/rank)
Computer Use +1 (1/int)
Concentration +1 (1/con)
Craft (Structural, Visual Art, Writing) +1 (1/int)
Diplomacy +4 (2/sense motive 2/trustworthy)
Disable Device +1 (1/int 1/rank)
Drive (+2 (2/dex)
Escape Artist +2 (2/dex)
Forgery +1 (1/int)
Gamble +3 (3/wis)
Gather Information +9 (3/ranks 1/occupation 2/trustworthy 3 skill
emphasis)
Hide +3 (2/dex 1/ranks)
Investigate +9 (1/int 6/ranks 2/attentive)
Jump +1 (1/str)
Knowledge (Behavioral Sciences) +2 (1/int 1/ranks)
Knowledge (Civics) +5 (1/int 3/ranks 1/occupation)
Knowledge (Streetwise) +2 (1/int 1/ranks)
Listen +10 (3/wis 5/ranks 2/alertness)
Move Silently +3 (2/dex 1/ranks)
Navigate +1 (1/int)
Profession +5 (3/wis 2/ranks)
Read/Write Language +3 (3/ranks)
Research +1 (1/int)
Ride +2 (2/dex)
Search +3 (1/int 2/ranks)
Sense Motive +10 (3/wis 5/ranks 2/attentive)
Speak Language +3 (3/ranks)
Spot +7 (3/wis 2/ranks 2/alertness)
Survival +3 (3/wis)
Swim +1 (1/str)
Treat Injury +4 (3/wis 1/ranks)
Languages : Speak, Read & Write English, Portuguese, Mandarin, Spanish
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And here's a background/description:
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Xavier Delano was born and raised in Oakland, California. An only child in a mixed race family, His father was Brazilian and his mother an American citizen of Dutch descent. Nobody would call the Delano family wealthy, but they were happy, living in a small two bedroom apartment in Berkeley.
This happy picture was shattered just after Xavier’s ninth birthday. One night, Xavier’s father, Robert, was in the wrong convenience store at the wrong time. An armed robbery went bad, and Robert Delano was killed. The medical examiners report indicated that the cause of death was high intensity third degree burns to the upper torso. The cause of these burns was unknown. The perpetrator was never brought to justice.
A pall fell over the Delano family. Xavier’s mother, Cassie, was forced to withdraw from her studies at UCLA. She ended up working two jobs to put Xavier through school. They were forced to move into a one bedroom apartment – Cassie slept on the couch in the lounge/dining/kitchen room. Xavier studied hard to prove to his mother that her work was neither unappreciated or in vain.
Xavier’s one indulgence was comic books. He had been collecting them since before he could read. Robert had read them to him as bedtime stories, tales of Spiderman and Superman and Captain America. After Robert’s death, Xavier lost interest in Superman and Spiderman. He began to read Batman and The Punisher. As time wore on, a determination and passion for Justice grew within Xavier.
He finished High School a year early. He attended UCLA as his mother had before him, studying Criminology and Law. Immediately upon graduation he applied to and entered the LAPD. He quickly rose through the ranks, becoming one of the youngest officers to make the rank of Detective. After serving as a detective for three years, he applied to and was accepted to the Federal Bureau of Investigation Training academy at the US Marine Corps base at Quantico, Virginia. As one of the most successful graduates of his class, he was assigned to the Federal Plaza office in New York as a Field Agent.
While studying at Quantico, Xavier’s mother disappeared when the cruise ship she was on went missing without a trace in the South Pacific. It had been her first holiday in twelve years.
After a couple of months of living in New York, Xavier started to notice some very strange things he could not explain. He started asking questions, reading old reports that lay dormant in filing cabinets in basements, and performing investigations that were not strictly part of the F.B.I.’s jurisdiction. His investigations caught the attention of a certain Agency that goes by many names.
As of last week, Xavier dresses only in attire specially sanctioned by MIB Special Services. He conforms to an identity given to him, eats where he’s told to, lives where he’s told to, gets approval for any expenditure over a hundred dollars. He has no identifying marks of any kind. He does not stand out in any way. His entire image is carefully crafted to leave no lasting memory whatsoever with anyone he encounters.
He’s a rumour, recognisable only as déjà vu and dismissed just as quickly. He doesn’t exist; He was never born. Anonymity is his name. Silence his native tongue. He is no longer part of “the system”. He is above the system. Over it. Beyond it.
He’s “Them”. He’s “They”.
He’s Ecks.
He’s a Man In Black.
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One word describes Ecks – Average. Standing 5’9” (175 cm) tall and weighing in at a wiry 170lbs (77kg). Short, neat, non-descript brown hair matches his unassuming brown eyes to complete the image of a perfectly average man.
When his investigative instincts are piqued, the change in Ecks’ demeanour is astounding. A steely glare replaces the vacant gaze, the set of his jaw indicates a determination not previously present, his posture straightens, almost as if coming to attention, and his stride lengthens with a purpose not previously present.
Of course, he wears a black suit.
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What do you think ?
-Chris