I like it better than the Order of the Stick because, frankly, I quickly grew tired of the constant references to game mechanics in OotS. Just give us a story, every once in a while a sideline is fine, but I quickly soured on the constant mention of game mechanics and other out of character speech.
I am plotting an oldschoolish graphic story based on my blog entries and I want to make an immersive story without taking readers out of the story as much as possible.
Overall, well done!