Darklance"s Of Sound Mind Story Hour

[Grendel]

Constructive Criticism:

This is allotting like reading the minutes from my last team meeting. The action is a little slower paced than is my preference, but it appears you group enjoys the everyday interaction and role-playing, which after all is what it is all about, but you might abridge the details for those of us with shorter attention spans.

 

[Darklance]

Thoughts noted. Thanks Grendel.
Everyone else thinking the same thing?

 

[Darklone]

Hehehehe cool!

I primarily think I like your group. No matter if a character is copied (Tier) or not, they look real nice.

And no, I don't mind long talks. Like it.

Btw: "Tier" means ANIMAL in German

 

[MavrickWeirdo]

I happen to enjoy dialogue myself

 

[Darklance]

Just so you know I've been busy but I intend to finish this.

 

[Plane Sailing]

Darklance - great to see another OSM story thread! Can't wait for you to get to the crunchy bits and see how they pan out for your adventurers. What levels are they BTW?

PS I found the second instalment much more readable than the first - I'd go for that kind of length by preference.

On with the story!