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DMs Guild [Design Notes] Forgotten Realms Travel Guide: Faerûn, Kara-Tur, and Zakhara

Trails and Tribulations

The Forgotten Realms trail guide I’m writing includes overviews of hundreds of locations in Faerun, Kara-Tur, and Zakhara. Prior to the release of the 2024 edition of the Dungeon Master’s Guide, I wasn’t sure how much detail I wanted to include when describing these locations. I want my trail guide to be a useful, big-picture reference guide to the many cultures and regions of the Realms without becoming redundant with any current or anticipated Forgotten Realms products.

Having seen and studied the Greyhawk Gazetteer section in the new DMG, I believe I’ve found the answer I need. As it so happens, the format used in that gazetteer dovetails almost perfectly with the system I’ve used to organized my notes for this project. By rewriting a few sections of the trail guide to match the gazetteer format, I’ve been able to create the type of concise summary I’ve been aiming for during the latest editing pass on my manuscript.

Before reformatting the relevant parts of the trail guide, I had focused a fair amount of word count on on detailed setting guides describing the Great Sea (between Faerun and Zakhara) and the Silk Road (between Faerun and Kara-Tur). After adopting the gazetteer format, those sections are less detailed, but I now have room to expand my coverage of the world. Instead of setting guides exploring two major trade routes, I now have a gazetteer exploring seven major trade routes.

Following the example provided by the new Greyhawk Gazetteer, I’ve divided the Realms into seven large-scale regions. Since my product is a trail guide, each of my large-scale regions is a collection of lands that lie on the same trade road or the same navigable sea. I still provide overviews of the Great Sea and the Silk Road, but I now also describe five other major trade routes: the Eastern Sea, the Golden Way, the Sea of Fallen Stars, the Southern Ocean, and the Trackless Sea.

I believe this approach will keep my trail guide from covering the same ground as the official Forgotten Realms campaign guide scheduled for release at the end of next year. I expect that guide will include a gazetteer which divides Faerun into regions based on thematic and geographical proximity. By focusing on long-distance trade routes which span the entire breadth of Faerun, Kara-Tur, and Zakhara, I believe I’m examining the setting from an entirely different perspective.

Despite the number of delays and rewrites it’s taken to get to this point, I think the process was worth it. I’ve cut and replaced nearly a hundred pages of content now. That was quite painful, but my manuscript is better for it. I now have the opening chapter I needed for this project. Instead of dwelling on city-level setting details, I now have a concise trade route gazetteer that better frames the top-level information I wanted to convey. I’m getting excited about this project again.
 

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Just another progress report for now. I've spent much of the past week doing page layout work. I developed a rough plan for the placement of illustrations, maps, and tables before starting any other tasks on this project, but until recently, I didn’t know the final sizes of those page elements. I now have that information, so I can start placing everything and editing the text to fit around it.

I have placed 108 illustrations throughout the book so far, not counting maps. (Each illustration actually makes use of two different stock art images, so I guess I’m technically placing 216 images.) I also have several dozen illustrations held in reserve in case I need spot art to fill white space or break up large blocks of text once the last few editing passes are done.

Placing the illustrations and maps is the easy part. Placing the tables is trickier, but the most onerous page layout task ahead of me is an editing pass to make sure the text around the other page elements fits into the allotted space. I’ve already started that work, but there will be a fair amount of rewriting and moving stuff about before it's finished.
 

Quick progress update: If I organize everything into two- and four-page spreads, depending on how I size things, I'm sitting on between 550 and 600 pages of content. On the one hand, this isn't a physical book, so there's no inherent limitation on the number of pages I include. On the other hand, I want to be absolutely sure every page is warranted, so I'll probably be spending a few more weeks doing page-layout Tetris and editing content for length.

All I want for Christmas is twenty-four additional hours every day until I get this done.
 

Between the recent holidays and some ongoing distractions at my day job, I haven’t had a chance to update this thread for a few weeks now. Thankfully, I’ve found time since my last post to make some progress on the book. Here’s a brief status report:

I’ve changed the working title to the Forgotten Realms Travel Guide: Faerun, Kara-Tur, and Zakhara. I had been calling it a trail guide, but the book discusses both trails and water routes, so I felt this title was more accurate. I’ve edited the title of this thread to reflect the change.

The travel guide’s page count stands at 656 pages, with most of the page layout complete. About 30 of those pages are stubbornly resisting all efforts to fit within their allotted space. The page count may shift slightly as I grapple with those tricky sections in the weeks ahead.

I’ve added some illustrations from DMsGuild art packs to supplement my stock art, and I’ve used images of details pulled from full illustrations as spot art where needed. Between full illustrations, spot art, and 117 maps, roughly half of the 656 pages include full-color artwork.

I believe most of my largest tasks on this project are now complete. I’m now polishing things up and fixing problem areas. Given that I have 656 pages and hundreds of pieces of artwork to finalize, I suspect I still have months of work ahead of me. I’ll check back in as I make more progress.
 

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