I was just wondering if more than me feels that many modules in Dungeon Magazine of lately are not very well designed. What I mean is that they contain lots and lots of errors, errors that shouldn't be there. Let me take Pandemonium in the Veins for example.
1: Skill points. To many errors to mention. Many NPCs receive more or less skill points than they should.
2: Feats. Jacobus Flugg, pg 37. Dex 11, Dodge? Come on!
3: AC. Kang Manjing, pg 60, Dex 13, Ac 10?? He should have had 11!
4: Logical errors:
4a: Severus Tulero (pg 46) is a snake-headed yuan-ti with spell-like abilities! MM says no!
4b: Cage Match pg 52. Squirt and Jeb Hurk have 20 and 12 fame points. According to page 43, they are new gladiators. How can they get as much as 20 fame points in, how many days? 3-4 at the most when the Arena Rules (pg 59) clearly states that the maximum fame points per match is 2. They would have to fight at least 3-4 matches a day.
Alignment Errors
4a: Mountain Morasso (pg 46) is Lawfull Good and tries to lie to the heroes in order to fix a fight with them. Lawful people do not lie.
4b: Alfonse Drellus (pg 42) is a bloodthirsty maniac who hates his daughter and tries to have her and the PCs killed. Neutral? At least Chaotic Neutral, if not evil.
It seems to me that this adventure was designed on a hurry, and I am really nervous to see what the adventures are like when they start coming out once a month. I still plan on using Pandemonium in the Veins, but I had to do a lot of unnecessary work for it to be correct.
1: Skill points. To many errors to mention. Many NPCs receive more or less skill points than they should.
2: Feats. Jacobus Flugg, pg 37. Dex 11, Dodge? Come on!
3: AC. Kang Manjing, pg 60, Dex 13, Ac 10?? He should have had 11!
4: Logical errors:
4a: Severus Tulero (pg 46) is a snake-headed yuan-ti with spell-like abilities! MM says no!
4b: Cage Match pg 52. Squirt and Jeb Hurk have 20 and 12 fame points. According to page 43, they are new gladiators. How can they get as much as 20 fame points in, how many days? 3-4 at the most when the Arena Rules (pg 59) clearly states that the maximum fame points per match is 2. They would have to fight at least 3-4 matches a day.
Alignment Errors
4a: Mountain Morasso (pg 46) is Lawfull Good and tries to lie to the heroes in order to fix a fight with them. Lawful people do not lie.
4b: Alfonse Drellus (pg 42) is a bloodthirsty maniac who hates his daughter and tries to have her and the PCs killed. Neutral? At least Chaotic Neutral, if not evil.
It seems to me that this adventure was designed on a hurry, and I am really nervous to see what the adventures are like when they start coming out once a month. I still plan on using Pandemonium in the Veins, but I had to do a lot of unnecessary work for it to be correct.