Gilladian
Adventurer
One thing I noticed is some vagueness in your description. For example, is the head a real head? Is it nailed to the door? Or is it a wooden carving hung on the door? Or carved stone part of the door? This can be critical to how the DM describes the room. Also, every room needs to be done in the SAME way. If you give a size description, always give it in the same way for each room.