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[ENWWC] A New Story (Updated: May 5)

Daniel Knight said:


Oh dear... it appears we are arguing for the same thing. I have no idea now. I would have said, all at the same time. Just say (for example) that Enk writes about the bar tender having a really good night until he finds his prize winning bull nailed to the ceiling of his bedroom. GWolf, might come in and write about how the bull got nailed to the ceiling in the first place. Then ajanders might come in and talk about one of the background characters Enk or GWolf had mentioned, and describe the journey he had to the island, and why he's currently staying at the inn, and have utterly nothing to do with ceiling hammered bovine.

Does that make it clear, or have I just made things worse?
Yeah, I think we are going nowhere with this discussion... I've got the point, although I think I had it already....;)
Anyway, I think we can settle down this discussion... And sit down and wait for Enk's post....
 

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Sorry this couldn't be longer, but I've been sort of swamped for time. Between hospital visits, putting together the baby's room, and updating the Small Beginnings story hour, the ideas for this circle just festered without me being able to really get a handle on them.

Anyway, I set this up not truly as a story in and of itself, but more as a stepping stone for the other writers. I hope that what I've got for you here gives you some ideas for the goings on at the Bloated Goat public house.

Hope you all have fun!

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Kedrin sat at the counter, sipping his nut-brown ale, when the stranger came through front entrance. The old door creaked loudly on its hinges, but the noise elicited no response from the thick crowd: not even from the dog that dozed contently at Kedrin’s feet.

The stranger wore a plain brown cloak that effectively concealed his body, making Kedrin wonder if it was actually a “him” at all. Likewise, the cloak’s hood had been pulled so far over the stranger’s face that it hid whatever telltale features the stranger possessed. Admittedly the weather outside – both chill and rainy – warranted a good covering, but when the stranger didn’t immediately doff his overcloak, Kedrin began to take notice. Interesting… I wonder what he, or she, has to hide?

The cloaked figure stepped quickly over to a stool next to the bar counter, just a few seats away from Kedrin’s own grey clad form. Corh, the draughtkeeper, simply poured a small cup of his Winter Vintage and sat it in front of the stranger. “This one is on the house, because I’ve never seen you before.” Not as if you can see him now either, Corh. What was it you told me last week? ‘I never remember a face – that way I’m not called on to identify it later, either by the Watch, or by the Undertaker.’ At least this one is making it easy on you… “From now on you pay. In advance. Rooms are available at the Goat’s Rest, behind the public house. Prices are on the board behind you. They double after sunset. Understand?” Corh didn’t wait for the stranger to even nod before turning away and busying himself with other tasks.

Kedrin studied the stranger out of the corner of his eye: average height, average build, just… average. Almost too average. Maybe I should…

“Hi stranger!” A second draughtkeeper appeared from below the bar as if out of nowhere. “Lorh’s the name. Welcome to the Bloated Goat Public House! How long you plan on staying here with us?” The stranger didn’t answer, didn’t even acknowledge Lorh’s presence. Good choice. If he actually thinks you’re paying attention, he’ll never stop.

“Not a talkative type, eh? Well, that’s fine enough I suppose. At least you’ll be better company than this one,” Lorh said, jerking a thumb toward Kedrin. “I’ll have Corh make up a room for you. Corh’s my son, by the way. He got my face, but his mother’s disposition – poor boy. One day he’s got to learn to appreciate the family business for more than the food it puts on the table. Running a public house isn’t about the money – it’s about the people. Take that pair in the corner,” Kedrin stopped himself from turning to follow Lorh’s finger, it would simply encourage him. “They came in here three days ago and bought the whole house not one but two rounds of drink! Said something about their fortune changing, and paid their bill in a clear ruby.”

Lorh paused, as if waiting for the stranger to say something in return. When it became apparent that he wouldn’t, the draughtkeeper continued anyway. “Or how about that young couple over there by the window: said they were newlyweds, but they don’t look it to me. Too jumpy, like they keep expecting the other shoe to drop. Then there’s those three at the back table, all peery at everyone who comes in the door. You too, stranger – don’t think they didn’t mark you as well as any.”

“Oh, and I haven’t even told you about the ship that set in last week! Looked like the whole crew made its way inward. Took over the whole place for two days! Made my boy happy – they spent good gold here, foreign stuff too. Then some of them headed up toward the hills.” Lorh leaned in conspiratorially to the stranger. “I think saw map. You know what that means: treasure!”

Kedrin snickered, and tried to cover it by turning it into a coughing fit. Lorh looked at him and then back to the stranger, “And don’t get me started on this one,” Lorh pointed toward, “he’s more than a bit off.” He whispered, “Sees things, like ghosts and such.” He tapped his finger against his temple and whistled. “Probably dropped on his head as a babe. Sad really.”

Lorh stopped for a moment and looked around the common room. “Well, I can see you’re more than a bit busy. I suppose I should get back to work myself. Drinks won’t pour themselves!” With that. Lorh ducked back underneath the bar.

Kedrin waited a few moments and slid over one stool toward the stranger. “Nice to see a new face around here. In fact, if you’re looking for work, I might have just the thing for you.”

Kedrin drained his glass. Through the bottom of it, he saw the familiar plaque:

In memory of our Husband and Father,
Lorh Vanders



*****

And on with the show!
 


What a Small Beginning , Enk!!
I mean, just as wonderful as your storyhour ( and dshai's too!!)...

I think Gwolf will get a plenty of ideas blossoming in his head....
 

Ok, I got a decent Idea, a bit strange, but I think I can make it work. I should be able to post it up Thrusday, Friday, or Saturday.
 

GWolf said:
Ok, I got a decent Idea, a bit strange, but I think I can make it work. I should be able to post it up Thrusday, Friday, or Saturday.

Don't forget that your soon-to-be fans are waiting. ;)
 

Black Bard said:
What a Small Beginning , Enk!!
I mean, just as wonderful as your storyhour ( and dshai's too!!)...

I think Gwolf will get a plenty of ideas blossoming in his head....

geez, you just have to keep making enk's and dshai's heads bigger! You don't have to deal with them on a daily basis you know!
 

Its a bit strange, and my first writing in a long time, hope it isn't too bad....

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Rusty pulled the damp hood of brown cloak off the top of his head exposing his neatly cut dark-brown hair. I’ve made it back…finally… He sipped on his offered drink, thinking quietly to himself, It’s been how many…ten years? .

Looking around the room Rusty spotted the usually mix of farmers, drunks, and mercenaries. Well, they may have been mercenaries, or the town guard or militia, Rusty couldn’t be sure, they may have even been thugs. Eyeing them up, he spotted 4-foot long swords on each of their persons as well as a layer of chain mail hidden beneath their vests.

“Another Ale” Rusty said laying down some money. The barkeep quickly filled his mug and continued working. Swords, I remember when I thought those were powerful, almost so as magic…. that was a long time ago… Chugging down half his glass, Rusty took some time to listen in on some farmer’s conversation next to him.

“Yew, been a really probably lately Ben, damn kobolds eating all ma damn apples, they come at….”

Rusty sighed, Monsters, those were scary once… the only monsters I dealt with for the last two years were men in gray uniforms… Putting his hand on his chin, Rusty continued to think. I don’t fit in here anymore, did I ever? After being there, I may never fit in anywhere….

“By the gods, is that Rusty Wilon?” A slightly large man in his late 20’s said slapping Rusty on the back and sitting on the stool next to him.

Rusty smiled at his old friend Paul, always the loud and friendly type. “Paul! How you been?” It had been 10 long years since Rusty left the island, and 10 years since he’d seen anyone he knew, it was a miracle, after all that happened, that he made it back, alive.

“I’ve been fine, I opened a carpentry business, making quite a profit.” Paul said taking another slug of his brew, “Damn, I haven’t seen you since I helped you stow away on that ship to the mainland so you could become an apprentice mage.” Paul scratched his head, “Did that ever work out?”

If only I could explain… Rusty looked at the floor for a moment in deep thought, Maybe I should tell him… “No, it didn’t,” Rusty dropped his voice to a whisper, and leaned in towards Paul. “The mage who took me in was a psychotic. During some strange spell he was casting, he killed himself, and sent me…I know it sounds crazy…. to another world.”

Paul placed his glass the counter carefully and rubbed his chin, in thought. “Continue, please.” Rusty couldn’t tell if his friend believed him or not, but he knew he was amazed.


Raising his voice a little, Rusty continued “Well, this world, was large, very large, I only saw a small piece of it myself, a desert region known as North Africa . He paused for a moment remembering the sand, and the hot sun. “There were no monsters, or magic. Men who looked just like you and me, who spoke a language similar to Common, known as English, found me in the middle of the desert. They asked me who I was and were I was from, they never heard of this place. They handed me a metal pipe with a handle, and told me I was to help them fight the Germans and Italians .”

Rusty took a slug and finished off his winter, bitter tasting ale. He looked, around, and saw that about half the people in the pub were looking and listening to him. He gulped, and began to sweat. This was a mistake…I never should’ve come back here…

“And, a lot of stuff happened…. and I made it back here by a freak miracle…” Rusty said pulling up his hood and heading for the door, at a rapidly increasing pace. They’d never understand, the guns, tanks, planes any of it…hell I barely do . He burst out the door, and into the cold and frosty stone streets of the town.

“Hey! You in the brown cloak!” Someone behind him called in a menacing voice.

Rusty turned, and gulped behind him were the trio of ‘mercenaries’ from the pub, long swords drawn. Rusty realized it now…they looked familiar… It couldn’t be…how could they have traced me back here…

“So it looks like the old man’s spell worked…do you have it?” The leader of the group asked. He was a big man, with long black hair, and wicked scar running down his left eye.

They must mean the scroll…I don’t have it…this could be bad . “I’m sorry, I don’t have it, why don’t you leave me and go back to your ale.” Rusty said fingering something in his cloak.

“Liar!” The leader shouted and started running towards Rusty.

Rusty’s cloak was gone in a second, thrown aside, in his hands, a short, metal and wood weapon…

Phsst! Boom! Clack!

The man fell to the ground, three nearly half-inch holes in his torso, spilling blood onto the icy streets…his sword spun, and fell beside him.

His cronies gulped, turn and ran. Rusty slung the weapon back over his shoulder, put on his brown, damp, and dirty cloak, and continued down the street…
 
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Okay, WWII, guns, mystery, and magi. Got it.

I'm still enjoying this immensly, thanks guys.
 
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fett527 said:


geez, you just have to keep making enk's and dshai's heads bigger! You don't have to deal with them on a daily basis you know!
I'm sorry, fett...
But I've got an idea!! Tell them to write no more!!!
Simple and efficient....:D
 

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