[ENWWC] ENWorld Writer's Circle Story Hour!

Well, I'm up.

I hope it's not too rough, I kind of dashed it off.
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He is coming. said the raven.

“I know.” replied the necromancer, as hoofbeats echoed through the pre-dawn mist.

Will you do it?

“Of course! The Axe is for the Hero Who Will Save Us. Elward is not the One, coin or no coin!”

But the curse?

“If I feared curses, I would not have sought the necromancers’ path.”

The horses emerged from the mist, riders dressed in livery of black and silver. At their head, with his hair falling lank against his collar, was Duke Elward. In his eyes was a look of triumph, the look of a man on the threshold of his destiny. “I see you have my boat ready, dark wizard.”

The necromancer nodded. “Will you travel to the island now? Dawn is upon us.”

“Of course, I fear nothing from the lake, with you at the helm.” Elward and his men dismounted. His many retainers were each armed with a crossbow and the young Duke himself carried his family’s longsword. There was no sound as he crossed the sodden grass to where the cloaked necromancer stood at the water’s edge. When the Duke reached the wooden longboat the necromancer held up his hand.

“Have you the coin?”

The Duke held forth the gold coin. The necromancer needed no magic to recognize the accursed thing. There was a moment’s silence, as the two men regarded each other across the simple gold disc. Grey light filtered through the bitter morning air and the breaths of the two mingled in misty clouds. On his shoulder, the necromancer’s familiar shook its wings and settled its feathers.

“Well necromancer,” said the Duke finally. “Shall we go to meet the new day of my greatness?”

“Pay me the coin,” said the necromancer, his voice slightly hesitant upon the words. “And I will protect you on the journey.”

“Ho no, wizard.” the Duke shook his head. “I’ll keep the coin for the tomb, thank you. Besides, the journey is not far, my men will protect me.” He nodded over his shoulder to where the soldiers stood, crossbows in the crook of their arms. Loyal men, every one, they watched attentively as their master negotiated with the master of black arts.

Together the necromancer and the Duke stepped into the boat. Seating himself in the prow, the Duke looked across the lake to the island, while the necromancer poled the boat away from the shore. As his gaze swept the lakes surface, the water black like night sky, polished like glass, the Duke called to his men, “Keep watch men, for when I return it shall be with the power to slay the orc, and to rout his brutal empire from our lands.”

The misty air swallowed the cheers of his men, and soon the boat was in a sea of grey.

“Brave words, lord Duke.” said the necromancer. “What if you are wrong? What if you are not the man of prophecy?”

“What do I care for prophecy, wizard? On the island is a weapon of power that has waited only for one with the courage to wield it! Bugger prophecy! That’s for old women and clerics. All I care about is power!”

“But does power care for you?”

The Duke did not answer the necromancer’s question, but only snorted in reply. It was only a short while before they reached the island in the middle of the lake, but already, the sun was burning off the mist. They were still just within bow shot of the shore. The Duke leapt from the prow and waded up to the island’s edge, pushing his way through sedge grasses. The mud at the bottom sucked at his feet, though he did not care.

The island was no more than a hummock of land, barely rising above the lake’s surface. There were no trees or bushes upon it, only long swamp grasses. In the middle was a squat, grey stone tomb, with walls unadorned by any markings. From the lake’s shore it looked like an irregular rock. Standing before the tomb, the Duke turned to wave to his men, who were now visible through the clearing mist. The necromancer climbed from the boat, his raven familiar squawking once, loudly, as it was dislodged from his shoulder. The bird’s cry echoed eerily across the waters.

“Well necromancer,” said the Duke. “How do we enter?”

“Give me the coin,” said the necromancer. “I will use it to open the way.”

The duke handed the wizard the golden coin. “I pay to open the way.” he said, turning back to face the tomb, eyes searching its surfaces intently.

Holding the coin in his hand, the necromancer reached into his robes and drew forth a garrote. Before the Duke knew what was happening, the thin wire was about his throat, choking the life from his body. Desperate for air, he thrashed about, driving up sodden grass and sprays of mud and water. From the lakeside, cries went up from the Duke’s men. There was the thrum of crossbow strings, the whistle of quarrels flying through the air and the splash of bolts striking the water.

In spite of the Duke’s struggles, the necromancers grip was resolute and soon his victims strength began to wane. At last, the body went limp, but before he could release the dead man, he herd a dreadful, wet thunk and his head was filled with blinding pain as a crossbow quarrel buried itself in his skull. He slumped forward, over the dead Duke, knowing that this was how it should be, for only one could ever handle the coin and live. The necromancer and the Duke slid into the black waters of the lake, entwined like lovers, though they felt nothing for each other in life.

Before his hand finally slipped below the water, the necromancer’s familiar performed its last service to its master. With its long beak it plucked the gold coin from his hand and took flight across the water. Whether it was the sound of its wings that drew their ears, or the glint of the gold in its mouth that drew their eyes, the raven could never know. A crossbowman on the shore took the bird in the breast as it flew overhead and the accursed coin fell from its beak to the forest below.
 

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Hey everyone, I’d just like to take this opportunity to say that, in my opinion, this story hour project is turning out pretty well so far, due in no small part to the writers who have already posted, the organisers (cheers Enkhidu) and all you glorious, glorious readers. And I reckon this coin story could just keep on rolling. It has a guaranteed update (more or less) every week, so could become huge.

Just as a minor thing, the reason this is verging near the deadline is because I decided to rewrite it with past tense - I wasn’t happy with some of the present tense in my usual story hour, so thought I’d try my hand at past tense here… I need to sort this stuff out, so if you do criticise, please be without mercy (if you strike me down Uberkitty, I shall become more powerful than you can possibly imagine) – so it took a little more time than usual. Sorry to keep you all waiting.

Anyway, I’ll shut up so you can read what you came here for:

The Coin: Part VI

Rallanth lowered the crossbow as the bird began to plummet downwards, its dead wings caught the rising wind as it fell, gliding it southwards for a moment as if it were still alive. Sliding a greasy strand of hair behind his ear, Rallanth sneered in victory. The first pools of morning light began to melt across the forest canopy; yellow shards highlighted the familiar’s spiralling descent into the awaiting sea of trees below.

Three of the crossbowmen plunged into the water, their cries of “Elward!” carried slowly to the drifting body of the duke, his face staring unseeing into the clear sky above.
“You fools,” cursed Rallanth as he glared at the wading men with his only remaining eye, “Elward isn’t important, it’s what he was carrying. Swim if you wish, but the lake is not kind to men such as he”.

The crossbowmen faltered, their hopes for Elward’s life savaged by the truth of Rallanth’s words. They all knew that the waters of Scales End were swarming with creatures more than capable of dragging a man under. Rallanth knew all too well that this was the truth, for his own right eye had been lost near the waters not more than a mile westwards. A creature neither man nor fish had stricken it from his body while he had slept. However, the creature did not last long under Rallanth’s awoken fury, and the fish man was broken and dead as Rallanth took his bloodied eye from its waning grip. Yet the eye was crushed and would not heal, so a substitute had been found.

“Ser. We can’t just leave him,” said a young crossbowman stood on the pebbled shore, his eyes cast out across the shimmering waters to the bodies of the duke and necromancer, “he might be alive”.
“Don’t be a damned idiot!” snarled back Rallanth, not caring to hide his contempt, “the Rillfins will already be cutting him to shreds”.
The men stood uneasy under the roving gaze of Rallanth, the ioun stone set into the trackers empty socket turned slowly with a wet grating sound as it mimicked the movements of his remaining eye.

“Follow me then. The duke is dead, but your duty is not ended. The coin must be retrieved and returned to Elward’s father at all costs,” grimaced Rallanth as he turned to the yellowing tree line, “he is not a patient man”.

Rallanth gauged the final trajectory of the skewered bird, his honed intuition estimated not more then three miles inward of where they now stood. Confident in his calculations, Rallanth mounted up and not even looking to see if the men followed, began to pick his way towards the heart of the forest.

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The iron tipped taste of a humans lifeblood attracted many creatures in Scales End, and the entwined bodies of the necromancer and the duke were no different.

A small red bird circled impatiently on the floating duke’s chest, its head darting precisely at each splash of the feasting Rillfins that occasionally brushed the surface of the murky water that surrounded the bodies. Old wives tales were told of how children playing in the waters of Scales End would have their ankles sliced open by the trailing razor tails of the tiny silver-scaled Rillfins, only noticing the deep cuts once the water clouded red.

The fish had made short work of the duke’s back. A matrix of thin red gashes chequered his black doublet and a dozen or so Rillfins thrashed wildly as they burrowed into the openings. The necromancer’s body, strangely avoided by the Rillfins, gently broke away from the embrace of the duke and glided out into the deeps of Scales End. The mage’s punctured skull trailed a soft red cloud, which the current whipped and curled as the body drifted, colouring the surrounding water into a red, misted haze.

Abruptly, the necromancer’s eyes snapped open. Unable to move his body, his eyes stared upwards through vein-streaked eyes at the dappled gold radiance above him, and the gliding body of the duke being kissed by so many spiralling lines of silver. He knew then that he had returned, yet only one thought echoed through his broken skull.
The coin
An aching darkness swept forth then, and once more, the necromancer plunged into a shadowed slumber. With a final push of the current, the necromancer came to a rest on the soft sediment of Scales End. His dreams were afire with thoughts of the coin, and his body began to ache with the dark energies that now bound and constricted his life into a new death.

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The kobold watched the human disarm yet another of his traps, wondering if the stone-eyed man would ever make a mistake. He had been told to not raise the alarm unless a trap was sprung, and Kattak was beginning to get nervous, as the humans were getting closer with each step. They wanted to kill Tussakak no doubt, probably for his stealing of that baby child.

The stone-eye snapped his head up as Kattak’s tail scraped lightly against a tree. Kattak clenched his spindly fingers around his spear and froze just like he was told to do. The other humans halted, little furry heads and bodies of metal creaking as they looked around. But Kattak was the best at hiding, and that was why he was a trapper.

Kattak watched with a pounding heart as the stone-eye and his friends turned back to the path and kept walking, stepping past his best ever traps as if they weren’t even hidden. The disparaged trapper stepped out of the trees cautiously, his snout flared as the scent of the sweaty metal men faded and his eyes squinted as the last of the armoured glimmers disappeared further into the forest.

Another tracker would probably tell Tussakak to run away anyway. It would be better if he stayed here and reset the traps, decided Kattak with a nod. An hour later the sun was trailing through the thin clouds above and Kattak had reset most of the traps. He only had two or three more left to check.

He shoved the first panel of the bear trap forwards again with a bark of exertion, jamming the board in far enough to stop the rusted teeth springing together. Kattak sat back in the muddied track and threw a few broken branches on top of the metal jaws, hoping the bears hadn’t learnt any of stone-eye’s tricks. His hand touched something hard as he leant back, and squatting in the middle of the path, he looked cautiously at the pack of mud sitting in his hand.

Scratching away a crumpled leaf, Kattak clawed free a dirty yellow coin encrusted with mud. He licked away the clumps of mud and proudly sat the gold coin on his palm for all the forest to see. Kattak jumped to his feet, and he couldn’t help but think of what Tussakak would say when he showed him the gold. He would be angry he did not find it himself! Kattak clasped the coin tightly and yipped eagerly as he scampered forwards. Straight onto his newly laid bear trap.
 
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Wow… it seems with each post the storytelling just gets better and better. What a challenge for each poster who follows! Well done Spider, love your style.
 


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And NiTessine should have the next installment up by 8/10, right?
 
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Here is my installment, then.

The Coin: Part VII

The dwarf whirled around as he heard the shrill cry cut the air, silencing the forest. For a long while, he stayed still as a statue, his eyes scanning the forest for movement. None presented itself, save for the branches of trees swaying gently in the breeze. Slinging his ancestral blade from his back, he went to investigate, moving slowly through the underbrush, sacrificing celerity in favor of silence.

He came upon a scene that almost made him laugh. A kobold was crushed in a rusty bear trap, its small body almost cut in half by the great iron jaws. The dwarf slung his weapon over his shoulder as he surveyed the corpse. Then, the glint of metal caught his eye. He knelt to investigate. There, in the debris of the forest floor, lay a golden coin. He picked it up, and peered at it. Though he had travelled the world for a good seventy years, and crossed the length and breadth of Malaeth while doing so, he had never seen a coin of such make. Shrugging, he put it in his pouch. Gold was gold, and if nothing else, it could always be smelted down and used to make real currency. He allowed him a quiet chuckle over the stupid kobold's fate. Probably set the trap itself, too.

He turned to return where he left, but was alerted by another loud sound, this time the snap of a twig under a boot, accompanied by human voices. He turned to look, and saw them, down in the valley, perhaps a hundred feet from him. They numbered seven, wearing studded leather armour, emblazoned with the heraldry of one local noble or another. All were on horseback. The dwarf did not care. The humans were all greedy, grasping fools, with no respect for the other peoples of Malaeth. The present route of the humans would bring them to his location, he realized, and he knew his steel boots left tracks that would be obvious to a blind man. Muttering under his breath, he hastily made his way back to his original track, and set upon his journey northwards. He knew the humans would catch up with him easily, and being dwarf in the middle of human lands was not going to help him. The short warrior knew he could defeat the men-at-arms without breaking a sweat, but butchering them would not be a diplomatically sound decision. He wished it would not come to that.

Half an hour later, they found him. He was climbing a low hillock, when he heard the call:
"You, dwarf! Halt!"
Cursing softly, he finished his climb, and turned to look at his pursuers. Seven faces stared up at him from behind seven crossbows. Coldly, he peered back at them from behind the face-concealing visor in his helm. He was confident that no man-made bolt could pierce the fine mithral plates that shielded his body.
"What do you want of me? Have the local soldiers nothing better to do than to harass travellers?" the dwarf replied in heavily accented Common.
The leader stepped forward, saying:
"We ask the questions here. Now, what would a dwarf do here in the south, in Duke Elward's lands?"
The dwarf peered down at the man, noticing his eye had been replaced with a gemstone of some sort.
"I am passing through, on my way back to Anvilhome."
"Back from where?"
"Journeying these lands for longer than you've lived, human."
"I am Rallanth, captain of Duke Elward's guard. Show some respect, runt."
"Well, I am Argus Calharn, Moradin's Blessed, Defender of Dwarvenkin, son of King Argald Calharn of Clan Silverpick, first of the Clans of Anvilhome. Now show some respect, captain."
Though some of his men took an involuntary step backwards, their faces betraying apprehension, Rallanth stood fast, glaring up at the grinning Argus.
"We seek a coin. A very special coin that we know is in this forest. If you know where it is, tell us. It'll save a lot of trouble."
Well, why not, Argus thought. A coin of no value, for avoiding offending the human kingdoms?
"In fact, yes, I do have such a coin," the dwarf replied. "I'll strike you a deal. You let me go free, I give you the coin."
"Yes, yes. Now give it here," the captain said, extending his hand.
Shrugging, Argus dug up the coin from his pouch, and threw it down in the man's feet.
The man scooped it up, peered at it closely for a moment, and pocketed it, seemingly satisfied. Then, he turned to one of the soldiers, and briefly spoke to him, quietly. Argus, from his lofty position atop the hill, could not hear what was said, but caught snippets of it. "Duke Elward's father…orders…from behind." Then, the man turned back to look at the dwarf.
"We are very grateful of your help. As a token, my men will escort you out of this kobold-infested forest."
Argus, seeing no point in arguing, nodded.

An hour afterwards, the dwarf was trudging along with the six riders. Rallanth had set off galloping to another direction, presumably to take the coin whoever wanted it. Must've been a very important coin, Argus thought, teasing a burr out of his bushy black beard.

They were walking through a large clearing, when that which Argus had been suspecting for a while happened. The horseman behind him struck down with his spear, sinking the tip in the crack between his helmet and the steel collar his backplate. The short blade met only more steel. Dwarven platemail was not so easily bypassed.
"Treachery!" Argus roared, whirling around to face the rider while slinging his ancestral weapon from his back. It was an urgrosh, a unique combination of axe and spear, a weapon only give to the chosen few Defenders of Dwarvenkin.
The rider spurred his horse into gallop, as three more spears struck Argus from behind. None of them even scratched the mithral. One of the men in front of Argus reared his horse, raising his spear for a throw. The dwarf swung his weapon in a large arc, letting the shaft slide in his hands for the optimum reach. The finely honed axe blade, veteran of a thousand battles, neatly severed the horse's both forelegs below the knee. Both horse and rider fell down heavily, the steed on top of the man. A downward chop with the axe ended the horse's suffering.

The five remaining riders were galloping around Argus, trying to get a spear past his defence. As soon as Argus turned to face one charger, another would come from behind and strike him from behind with a spear. One of them kicked him in the head, and was rewarded with an axe blade in his thigh, cutting through leather, flesh and bone with ease. The horse ran past Argus, leaving its wounded rider lying on the ground with the destroyed saddle.

A quartet of crossbow bolts clattered off his breastplate. After seeing the fate of their two companions, the surviving four riders took a more careful stance. Argus grinned wildly, the fires of battle burning deep in his heart. They were not the only ones who could attack from a range. He fidgeted a while with his armoured glove, and then shook out three small throwing axes from their sheath in his sleeve. The next rider raised his crossbow, aiming at the dwarf, only to fall back with an axe handle sprouting from his forehead, and a shattered crossbow falling from his limp hands.

"Who's next!?" Argus shouted at the three riders, now keeping a respectable distance from the dwarf and his lethal weapons, and aiming at him with their bows. The dwarven warrior walked over to the nearest slain soldier, and picked up his crossbow, still loaded and carrying a bolt. Seeing this, the riders bolted to the forest. The dwarf aimed and fired, dropping one last man from his saddle.

Good, he thought. Horses leave tracks even I can follow. And those horses go where that treacherous bastard Rallanth must be.

Argus reclaimed his throwing axe, and set out after the fleeing pair of soldiers. All thoughts of diplomacy forgotten, the dwarven warrior was going to show the cowards a taste of dwarven vengeance.
"Fear me, Rallanth, for I am coming for your head!"
 

Good update! :)

We're really picking up a sense of a cohesive world now. Combined with a few continuing characters, the stories are flowing well.

By the way, I really liked the casual handing over over the coin by Argus. Great stuff.

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