Botj eyes the dark-clad tiefling, taken aback for just a moment at her brashness. "You mistake my words, eh dark one? Us Rripangu and Djaapana not be peaceful about stolen tjurunga because we choose, we peaceful because we have to be. Our sacred trust of the tjurunga more important than anything else for us. But, too many gnome and shifter, not enough of the people, eh?"
"Matjala, him hot-headed about it. Thinks maybe we should lead war party. I yaka agree. He have his theories, but who knows who stolen our heritage? That's why we need ambassador, and scout. Find out what's going on. If killing is needed, so be it."
Botj looks appraisingly at Jezebel for a moment, then continues, "You a fierce warrior, eh? Good at getting job done? Maybe you come along, help find tjurunga. We make you gift of girri, both benefit."
The tiefling in black shows a faint smile at Botj's response.
"Of course; we can't just go around killing the wrong people, now can we? You'll have my sword and shield for the investigation." Despite Jezebel's choice of words, she does not seem particularly well armed. She is wearing only the dark clothing and a dagger sheath at her side.
She ignores the arcanist's chastisement.
[sblock=Alnar]If I may take a quick glance at your sheet:
Your Reflex and Will defenses are off in the summary. It should be Reflex 12, Will 17. The values in the math section are correct.
I think it's typical to list all skills in the summary, not just the trained ones (although I suppose either style is fine).
Chromatic Orb: the blue and violet effects are mixed up (damage types are correct).
Melee basic attack: You get your weapons proficency bonus to the attack roll (if you're proficient of course). The quarterstaff's bonus is +2, and you have +2 strength. You also add strength to damage, and quarterstaffs do d8 damage, not d6. The line should read Quarterstaff +4 vs AC 1d8+2. If you wanted to list the dagger you have (+3 proficiency bonus), it would be Dagger +5 vs AC, 1d4+2.
Dragonfrost: You might want to mention that this power can be used as a ranged basic attack, either in the power summary or in the ranged basic entry.
Equipment: You don't have to pay for the cloth armor you start with (you start with "basic clothing and 100 gold pieces"). I didn't think you had to track its weight either, but I can't find a line in the PHB to support that. /shrug
Equipment: The ritual book costs 50gp, and the comprehend languages ritual costs an additional 50gp. You won't be able to afford the ritual just yet. (Unlike wizards who start off with a ritual book and a 3 rituals, sorcerers start with neither).
That's all I saw. ScorpiusRisk ninja'd my post with an approval, but I caught a few things he missed. =p[/sblock]