FFG Legendary Class contest submissions
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I received it and printed it out yesterday afternoon, but with fencing training and trying to prepare a proposal for a publisher I haven't had time to go through it yet...
I'm pretty confident that we've everything for the King's Warden and the Maitre d'Escrime sorted aside from any minor typos and syntax errors that will be picked up during the final proofing, but I'll get to it as soon as I can...
blackshirt5
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YAY!!! Don't worry, I won't distribute it, although I'm sure that at least one or two of my players are gonna look over my shoulder when I'm browsing through it.
And my vote would go for the two of em(art + non-art) together in a single zip file.
And my vote would go for the two of em(art + non-art) together in a single zip file.
My bad. I'm a slacker, I know. If anyone has the time and the desire, feel free to play with either of my LgCs.
As an excuse, I HAVE been busy There'll be no less than four books out this spring w/ my name on them somewhere!
Thanks again to Khur for spearheading this venture. I am really looking forward to seeing the final product.
Hey Khur, think you could email me whatever working copy you've been showing around? I can't receive it at my work address, I'll send you my yahoo address here in a sec.
Good work, gentlemen
-Reddist
As an excuse, I HAVE been busy
There'll be no less than four books out this spring w/ my name on them somewhere!Thanks again to Khur for spearheading this venture. I am really looking forward to seeing the final product.
Hey Khur, think you could email me whatever working copy you've been showing around? I can't receive it at my work address, I'll send you my yahoo address here in a sec.
Good work, gentlemen
-Reddist
kingpaul
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Alright, here's what I found. I'll be honest, I was focusing on the Divine Weapon, but I did read through the entire document. No offense is meant by any of these comments
Alright, here's what I found. I'll be honest, I was focusing on the Divine Weapon, but I did read through the entire document. No offense is meant by any of these comments
- p. 3, 2nd paragraph: "...such as the in the title: Ch'Tal's Hammer." This seems to be missing something.
- p. 5, Divine Awareness - since Darkvision got incremented, do you think that Lowlight should as well?
- p. 5, Might of the Eternal is an (Ex) ability
- p. 5, now that Darvision is incremented, Kaob should have it at 100'
- p. 6, in Thunderer's stat block, a comma (,) is missing between Quiet Step and Stamina
- p. 7, I don't think apostate is a proper term to be using in that write-up. This is the definition that I'm used to.
- p. 8, I like the spell. However, could it also be a Cleric spell, since the class that inspired the spell is divine in nature?
- p.9, Ch'Tal's stat block. The term "Greater Deity" and the domain Community are closed content of WotC, and as such, need to be removed.
- p. 10, "...force [to] stop evil and injustice." I think the "to" was missing from the sentence
- p. 28, 2nd paragraph. "She was found that...", I think the "was" shouldn't be there
- p. 30. Nimrod keeps making reference to Ranger abilities, but does not have Ranger as a prerequisite. Is this intentional? For instance, the 1st quest mentioned makes note of Ranger levels and Favored Enemy. What if the character doesn't have these? They aren't required.
- p. 32, paragraph 1. "...traveling ring...." That phrase made no sense to me.
Khur
Sympathy for the Devil
Re: comments
Please, all of you, don't worry about offending me. I'm not so easily bruised.
(Are some persons really so touchy?) Besides, I want this project to shine. So few foibles when I haven't done the "polish" edits is actually a heartening development.
Most of the changes you've pointed out are great. Low light vision is a simple doubling of sight range in dim light conditions per the Player's Handbook, so it doesn't need to be incremented. (That it could be incremented, even for PHB races, is another issue.) The only other one I didn't change is Might of the Eternal. One-time ability bonuses are not denoted by any qualifier in these classes, nor do they need to be.
As for the Nimrod problem, that it needs to have a prerequisite of the Favored Enemy class ability, or have some other means of defining the type of enemies the nimrod must hunt in his quest is beyond doubt. This quest also makes it easier on a character that has fewer ranger levels. Sheridan may shed some light on this subject.
One possibility:
Prerequisites
Special: The character must possess at least two favored enemies, either through the ranger class ability or some other means, such as a feat or prestige class ability.
Quests
Before becoming eligible for achieving nimrod status, the character must eradicate an entire community of each of his favored enemy types per four character levels. At least one specific creature from each of the prospective nimrod's favored enemies must be selected. For example, Venator (Rgr 12) has three favored enemies at this point: beasts, goblinoids, and oozes. To become eligible for nimrod status, Venator must eradicate three groups of favored enemies from the region. He decides to rid his area of a goblin tribe, owlbears, and ochre jellies. The DM must approve any choices the player makes, and the aspirant may not be aided by more than five other characters.
...and etc.
Thanks again!
EDIT: I don't remember putting apostate in the Divine Weapon, but I must have.
I changed it to: "The announcement caused uproar among the prelacy...."
Excellent Paul!kingpaul said:
Please, all of you, don't worry about offending me. I'm not so easily bruised.
(Are some persons really so touchy?) Besides, I want this project to shine. So few foibles when I haven't done the "polish" edits is actually a heartening development.Most of the changes you've pointed out are great. Low light vision is a simple doubling of sight range in dim light conditions per the Player's Handbook, so it doesn't need to be incremented. (That it could be incremented, even for PHB races, is another issue.
) The only other one I didn't change is Might of the Eternal. One-time ability bonuses are not denoted by any qualifier in these classes, nor do they need to be.As for the Nimrod problem, that it needs to have a prerequisite of the Favored Enemy class ability, or have some other means of defining the type of enemies the nimrod must hunt in his quest is beyond doubt. This quest also makes it easier on a character that has fewer ranger levels. Sheridan may shed some light on this subject.
One possibility:
Prerequisites
Special: The character must possess at least two favored enemies, either through the ranger class ability or some other means, such as a feat or prestige class ability.
Quests
Before becoming eligible for achieving nimrod status, the character must eradicate an entire community of each of his favored enemy types per four character levels. At least one specific creature from each of the prospective nimrod's favored enemies must be selected. For example, Venator (Rgr 12) has three favored enemies at this point: beasts, goblinoids, and oozes. To become eligible for nimrod status, Venator must eradicate three groups of favored enemies from the region. He decides to rid his area of a goblin tribe, owlbears, and ochre jellies. The DM must approve any choices the player makes, and the aspirant may not be aided by more than five other characters.
...and etc.
Thanks again!
EDIT: I don't remember putting apostate in the Divine Weapon, but I must have.
I changed it to: "The announcement caused uproar among the prelacy...."
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blackshirt5
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Khur said:
I'm showing this quote to my players and saying "see, not everybody in the world thinks I'm an overeager pain in the ass!"
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