Fleshing out your character

Here are some really basic descripter words that i have as a basis for appearance.

Kiah , Female 5'4" - 5'6" Just below shoulder light soft brown hair . flows down below ears to the side of the head so only the bottom of the neck is exposed? see i guess i can describe but the methods i use are rather clumsy and unrefined and are easily misunderstood so they pain a Completely different picture for everyone. um... thinnish eyebrows but not too thin but not too thick. Fair soft white skin.. Untanned. Light blue Eyes , Young (early 20's). This is what i mean i can be vague but i have problems with being very detailed. I think that is in a round about way why i made this thread to see if anyone could help me learn to know how to add extra detail by using descripter words that would appear to be author like.;)
what does the term slack cheeks mean? and what would be the opposite? hopefully its not silly to want to detail so much. I like other people to be able to imagine this character quite well that way when interacting with my character they feel more immersed and easier able to imagine i suppose.
 
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