BelenUmeria said:This is very poorly written. They really need some editor's over there.
msd said:Not sure why you say that, seems ok, maybe a few run-on sentences and an overuse of commas, but otherwise fine, what gives?
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BelenUmeria said:This is very poorly written. They really need some editor's over there.
BelenUmeria said:There is no tone or direction. It seems to run together and they left out articles such a "The" in too many sentences. It reads as if Ben Stein was droning on about dry econ principles.
JoeGKushner said:How about a break down for those who can't get there?