I know some people are reading my story hour because I have a 30:1 view-to-post ratio, but it ticks me off that I rarely get a comment. Is it so wrong to want an outside opinion on your writing?
Ya, I understand. I had a story hour and had no one but myself post to it. I'm currently writing another but want to get a few good write ups before I post them. Saddly though the most interesting part of my writing is what is happening off screen
I think the problem is that my story starts off looking like a romance novel, then turns into the adventure that people go to story hours for, and stays that way. What I need is better advertisement.
I thought you meant it was based on communist humans. 
