Its obvious you have put a lot of work into this, and the .pdf is of a high quality.
But what I think your lacking right now is an introduction or some other easy way of getting across what your world is about. I would try and write two (or three at the most) paragraphs really setting out what you feel is the strength of the setting.
But what I think your lacking right now is an introduction or some other easy way of getting across what your world is about. I would try and write two (or three at the most) paragraphs really setting out what you feel is the strength of the setting.