Hello.
I'm writing a splat book about Kobolds. And just finished chapter about Theology and could use that some other people read it.
I'm mostly interested in answers to does question:
Did you have problem with understanding anything?
What part you liked?
What part you disliked?
What part I should expand and/or clarify?
Did anything was missing?
But will accept all constructive Feedback.
If you are interested pleas send PM me your email and I will send the chapter as an odt file to you.
Pleas do not share it. I plan on publishing/Selling it.
I'm writing a splat book about Kobolds. And just finished chapter about Theology and could use that some other people read it.
I'm mostly interested in answers to does question:
Did you have problem with understanding anything?
What part you liked?
What part you disliked?
What part I should expand and/or clarify?
Did anything was missing?
But will accept all constructive Feedback.
If you are interested pleas send PM me your email and I will send the chapter as an odt file to you.
Pleas do not share it. I plan on publishing/Selling it.
