FitzTheRuke
Legend
Oh, and @Fenris-77 regarding Little Paradise = Shrimp Heaven...
I think subconsciously I must have got it, but it never came to the fore. Because I kept reading your description of her over and over thinking, "There's an ingredient here, but I can't tell what it is!"
I think, had you not used the word "shrimp" elsewhere, I might have caught it (though maybe not) because when it came to them, I kept thinking, "well, they're dead, I guess, but where's their 'heaven'?"
I see where you were going now with the name. Cool attempt.
I think subconsciously I must have got it, but it never came to the fore. Because I kept reading your description of her over and over thinking, "There's an ingredient here, but I can't tell what it is!"
I think, had you not used the word "shrimp" elsewhere, I might have caught it (though maybe not) because when it came to them, I kept thinking, "well, they're dead, I guess, but where's their 'heaven'?"
I see where you were going now with the name. Cool attempt.
