[Iron Heroes] A Saga of Might - OOC (Re-recruiting)

[Shayuri]

Why do you have a Shield and Size bonus to AC?

 

[Frozen Messiah]

Why do you have a Shield and Size bonus to AC?

Due to the format I was using everything got pushed over, there isn't anything I can do about it

 

[Shayuri]

You can't just...Edit it? Okay.

 

[Frozen Messiah]

You can't just...Edit it? Okay.

Nope, because it looks entirely normal when I go to edit it and no amount of spacing seems to change it, if you want I could put a whole bunch of dashes to push it over though if it is bothering you.

 

[Walking Dad]

My try:

[B]Name:[/B] Lazarus "The Shark" Stern

[FONT=Arial][B]Class:[/B] Executioner[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Race:[/B] Human[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Size:[/B] Medium[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Gender:[/B] Male[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Deity:[/B] Ramardas, God of Sailors and the Ocean[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Courier New][B]Str:[/B] 10 +0 (10p.)    [B]Level:[/B] 1        [B]XP:[/B] 
[/FONT] [FONT=Courier New][B]Dex:[/B] 18 +4 (4p.)     [B]BAB:[/B] +1         [B]HP:[/B] 8 (1d4+5)
[/FONT] [FONT=Courier New][B]Con:[/B] 12 +1 (6p.)     [B]Grapple:[/B] +1     [B]Dmg Red:[/B] -/-
[/FONT] [FONT=Courier New][B]Int:[/B] 14  +2 (5p.)    [B]Speed:[/B] 30'      [B]Spell Res:[/B] XX
[/FONT] [FONT=Courier New][B]Wis:[/B] 16 +3 (1p.)     [B]Init:[/B] +4        [B]Spell Save:[/B] +X
[/FONT] [FONT=Courier New][B]Cha:[/B] 8  -1 (10p.)    [B]ACP:[/B] -1         [B]Spell Fail:[/B] %[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Arial] .                [B]Base  Defense    Shld   Dex  Size     Nat  Misc  Total[/B][/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Armor:[/B]      10           +1           +0     +4    +0        +0    +0      15[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Touch:[/B] 14              [B]Flatfooted:[/B] 10[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Arial] .                      [B]Base   Mod  Misc  Total[/B][/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Fort:[/B]                   +0      +1      X       +1[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Ref:[/B]                    +2      +4      X       +6[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Will:[/B]                   +0      +3      X       +3[/FONT]
[B][FONT=Arial]Weapon                  Attack   Damage     Critical[/FONT][/B]
 
[FONT=Arial][B]Traits:[/B] Sea Child (Fisherman), Perceptive[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Arial][B]Languages:[/B] Common, Sea Speech, Draconic[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Arial][B]Abilities:[/B] Execution Pool (1 token), Excecutioners Eye, Hindering Cut, Sneak Attack +1d6[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Arial][B]Feats:[/B] Exotic Weapon Prof. (Net), Trident Mastery, Hafted Weapon Mastery[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Arial][B]Skill Points:[/B]        [B]Max Ranks:[/B] 4[/FONT]
[B][FONT=Arial]Skills                   Ranks  Mod  Misc  Total[/FONT][/B]
[FONT=Arial]Balance                      4       +4   +2[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Climb                         4       +0[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Jump                         4       +0[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Hide                          4       +4[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Know.(Nature)            4       +2[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Listen                        4       +3[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Move Silently              4       +4[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Profession (sailor)        4       +3[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Search                       4       +2[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Sense Motive              4       +3[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Spot                          4       +3[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Use Rope                   4       +3[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Swim                         4       +0[/FONT]
[FONT=Arial]Tumble                       4       +4[/FONT]
 
[B][FONT=Arial]Equipment:               Cost  Weight[/FONT][/B]
 
[FONT=Arial][B]Total Weight:[/B]      [B]Money:[/B] gp sp cp[/FONT]
 
[FONT=Arial]                     [B]Lgt      Med      Hvy       Lift       Push[/B][/FONT]
[FONT=Arial][B]Max Weight:[/B]   33lbs    66lbs   100lbs   200lbs   500lbs[/FONT]

You cannot start a line with spaces, or the spaces are deleted. I just changed the first 'space' to '.'.

Also, if you use 'Courier New' all letters have the same wide.

 

[Dr Simon]

The +1 "armour" bonus is actually Base Defence, but I guess that "sheet" doesn't allow for that option. I'd like it if everyone could break their skills into the skill groups and single (cross-class) skills, like WD and Mfloyd, makes it easier to assess points.

How's the character concept coming, Shay?

 

[Shayuri]

I'll have stats and at -least- a basic background and so on up tonight.

Thanks for letting me agonize a bit.

 

[Frozen Messiah]

My try:
You cannot start a line with spaces, or the spaces are deleted. I just changed the first 'space' to '.'.

Also, if you use 'Courier New' all letters have the same wide.

Thanks man, I owe you one. I'm sort of new with the format so i just thought that it works like that. Sometimes it will be poistioned right but this will help a lot.

 

[Shayuri]

Here's the stats and description.

Background I'm a bit stuck on. I don't want to do a silly 'raised by animals' thing, but I like the idea of a sort of primitive, quasi-feral warrior. Any thoughts as to what would be appropriate?

Name: Vela
Race: Human
Class/Level:
Gender: Female
Exp: 0

Desc
Vela is of medium height and has a slim, athletic build for a human woman, though she often seems shorter because she doesn't always stand up straight. Her hair is dark blonde, the color of ripe wheat, and a bit stiff and shaggy. It grows in a wild tangle from the sides and back of her head like a mane, and trails off in a thin tail midway down her back. She has suntanned skin a few shades darker than her hair. Her eyes are an unusual shade of honey-amber, large and liquid. She wears little; a belt of twisted hemp sits low on her hips supporting a few pouches and hide loincloth, and a halter of deerskin.

Strength (STR) 16
Dexterity (DEX) 16
Constitution (CON) 14
Intelligence (INT) 10
Wisdom (WIS) 14
Charisma (CHA) 12

Alignment: Neutral Good
AC: 14 (10 + 3 Dex + 1 class)
Hit Points: 10 (1d4=4)
Roll Lookup
Movement: 30'

Init: +5
Base Attack Bonus: +1
Melee Attack: +4
Ranged Attack: +4
Fort: +3
Reflex: +4
Will: +3

Traits
Resilient Toughness - Spend Con points from reserve pool as full round action
Brave - Immune to fear

Class Abilities:
Combat Speed Bonus: +10'
Combat Mobility - +4 defense vs motion-incurred AOA, Tumble at full speed w/no penalty

Skills:
Agility 4
- Balance +7
- Escape Artist +7
- Tumble +13
Athletics 4
- Climb +7
- Jump +7
- Swim +7

Knowledge: Nature +4 (4 ranks)
Hide +7 (4 ranks)
Move Silently +7 (4 ranks)
Listen +6 (4 ranks)
Spot +6 (4 ranks)
Survival +6 (4 ranks)

Feats
1 Unarmed Combat (Finesse)
1 Dodge (Defense)

Languages - Common

Money -

Weapons -


Armour -


Gear -
Misc and Sundry

Magic -

 

[Herobizkit]

Background I'm a bit stuck on. I don't want to do a silly 'raised by animals' thing, but I like the idea of a sort of primitive, quasi-feral warrior. Any thoughts as to what would be appropriate?

Well, given that you're starting the campaign as slaves, how about creating a whole barbarian tribe/clan who worships nature and animals (something like First Nations people), working and fighting alongside them as equals? The issue, of course, would be that your Common tongue may not be as eloquent as others, and because of this, the Ur-Men saw your people as prime slave material.