Steve Gorak
Adventurer
Masleh said:I checked over the character, mechanicly he's sound. As far as his backstory goes
Steve Gorak only [sblock] The chruch of the Silver Flame is based upon the sacrifice of a Saint and a Coutal's sacrifice in the country of Thrane, which also maintains the majority of its followers on the continent of Khorvaire (the central playing area of Eberron). You may link Kalandars psionic ability with the coutals own psionic natures, which also increases the significance of the monestary. However you should be informed that Eberron is unique in it's treatment of clerics, they need not share the alignment of their faith; this is espescially apparent in the Silver Flame. Since we'll be starting in Sharn (a metropolis on the southern tip of Breland) we could have Kalandar in Sharn to investigate suspected corruption within the citys chruch. To name names, the Archheirophant Ythana Morr is suspected of trafficing with fiends. However, only the Keeper of the Flame (11 year old Jaela Daran, head of the Church in a spiritual sense) is possessed of this knowledge spoken to her directly from the Flame itself, but is afraid of ramifications from the Council of Cardinals should she move directly against Ythana. Towards this end she has requested your aid rooting out the Archheirophants corruption. Since your character wishes to bolster charity within the city, it makes an admirable front for his true purpose in Sharn, and gets him in close contact with Ythana. Of course is this balks with your picture of the character, or doesn't fit with your play style, we can work out an alternate history.
Secondly, Kalandar is abit high of level and abilities to have spent the entirety of his life in monestary. Though he may still hail from a monestary and keep residence within its confines, I'd prefer him to have an active past more in fitting with his high level. There are many avenues for this in the setting, but perhaps the easiest to use would be The Last War, a conflict that raged across the continent of Khorvaire for the past hundred years and ended only two years ago, could provide many avenues of work for Kalandar. While unlikely for him to take direct action on any side, Kalandars talents could have been put to use aiding refugees, stoping unchecked merecenaries, or providing aide to war torn regions of Thrane (given the length of time the conflict went on, and the power used during its span, there's a lot of these)
After dealing with these two considerations your backstory should be pretty well finished[/sblock]
For Masleh's eyes only!
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I definitely like the idea of working directly for Jaela Daran. Maybe Kalandar received a vision and petitioned to meet Jaela, and this is when she asked him to investigate Ythana.
Also, I like the idea of him having made a noame for himself during the end of the Last War.
I'll review Kalandar's feat, skill and power selection so it better fits with this twist.
Thanks for the input!
Cheers,
SG
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