This is a good read, and it inspired me to start the Crimson Throne AP. I also had a bit of an archive binge with JD's STAP write-up.
I have one niggling note of criticism, however. The action of putting an arrow to a bow is "to nock". Not "knock". When you're married to a technical writer spotting this kind of thing rubs off.![]()
I need to get more of a fix of your writing can you give me links to your other story hours