Silverlion said:
Argent: I like the write up except the family secret. I don't see anything in that secret that be as game effecting as a flaw. Perhaps you can expand on it a bit?
The Family secret is very important and powerful.
1) What would happen to Jack and his father not to mention Jack's friends if it were found out that Jack is the son of Beautiful Vision? Everything from revenge murder to kidnapping.
2) What about those psychos who find out that the powers had to be transfered from one generation to the next? People would be after Jack to force him to give powers to them that he does not have.
3) More psychos who would want to experiment on Jack to see if they could gain powers.
This all weighs heavily on a 13 year old.
also something I really didn't expound on.... The deamonic gift is the power to effect peoples emotions and perceptions to the extent of causing the body to react as if the illusiions are real.
His Great Grandfather used the powers for personal gain ammasing a huge fortune and killing people with a glance. He most definatly had enemies
His Grandfather (Creeping Horror) used the powers for good but by instilling fear and pain. He would have a few enemies that may still be alive.
His Mother was the opposite of the men in the family. She was a kind woman who used her gift of "glamour" as she called it to heal and protect. but she too had enemies.