DiFier,
I thank you for all the effort you put into this pic, it's not bad, but I feel it doesn't quite belong in this adventure (the style).
Like I said in a thread in the Arts forum, as an open call to artists to illustrate CD-X adventures... :
"Do not be offended if a pic you submitted is not accepted. This might happen (and DID happen actually) and is not meant as negative criticism of your art. It is just that I (we) do not feel it fits the concept or mood of the dungeon."
I eagerly await your room 5 in CD-2 !