Bran Blackbyrd
Explorer
It lives! It lives still!
Okay, I think I finally have something for this, you feline rapscallion.
The Squirming Pool
Travelogue of Adis Aizarian
Village of Leesmere: Got confirmation that the ruins we were looking for exist. Should lie three days West of here. A local hedge-wizard insisted that we take his apprentice, Jimmy, with us. “You lack a manipulator of the arcane, and he needs the experience.” the wrinkled old bastard said. I hate casters… but we let him come along and help guide the pack mules. If he tries anything funny with his magic I’ll leave him alone half-way across the plain, or down the crevasse.
Two Days Out of Leesmere: Gads, what a bumbler! The boy has had his nose in books so long he can’t do anything right. It took us an hour after we made camp for the night to retrieve the mules; half an hour more for the horses. Not only did he not hobble them properly, but I am certain it was some of his fool magic that spooked them.
How I kept my calm with the boy I will never know.
Three Days Out of Leesmere: I see the crevasse not a hundred yards away; it lies like an unhealed wound in the middle of the plains. Down that hole there waits the entrance to a temple whose untold riches are said to make the Shrine of Good Fortune look like a ramshackle bawdy house, and I intend to find it. The trip to Coppervale was a waste, I know that now. The first team never returned, nor did the men who went in after them. Being third-string on a treasure hunt never felt so good; may their souls find peace. I swear I heard their screams...
I’m older now, wiser; I’ve made a name for myself. This will be different, not the leavings of some forsaken mining town but the riches of an ancient temple.
This is why we brought so much rope; a hundred feet down into the black we found the door!
It is opened! We leave our footprints in the dust of a century or more, not a soul has disturbed it in that much time. The first part of the legend holds true, now for the second; in three, down five. In three rooms and down five floors, treasure and glory will be ours.
What luck we have! Tales told in taverns by old drunks come true before our very eyes. We stand at the edge of ‘The Pit’, resting place of treasures untold, sacrificed into a hole in the ground by some forgotten cult. Pay day! The pit is at least a hundred feet across; I see that with my own eyes. The tales say it is five hundred deep or more.
First Night in the Temple: So close and yet so far. There’s a barrier around the pit, something I can’t see, but prevents our passage. The boy seems to think he can ‘dispel’ the obstacle. Whatever the barrier is, it’s making it hard to see into the pit. It may be a trick of the torchlight, but it looks like there is water in the pit; black water in the darkness.
I’ve retreated to the first floor! Writing this from a hiding place-
The pit was surrounded by a number of glyphs. A gemstone embedded at each of the four winds. My men and I don’t know magic, we know trouble. -couldn’t pay us to pry those stones loose, but that boy, THAT FOOL BOY! We were not watching- he pried loose a purple stone the size of a child’s fist. A child’s fist by my bones! My hair stood on end. -air went sour; I knew the unseen impedance was no more. Something was wrong.
I stood at the edge of the abyss and looked into the squirming pool. Feared had I that hundreds of feet of water would keep us from our prize; if only that were true.
Black and viscous, it writhes in the pit! I have seen the putrid little balls of snot called Black Pudding in my travels. I’ve killed them. This- This is a horror beyond imagining, my very own nightmares could not have perverted reality into something this unrelentingly vile. If the pit was as big as the rumors would have us believe, this oozing monstrosity occupied a space five hundred feet deep and one hundred across! Before it lurched upward and took the boy into its mass it came a scant eight feet or less from coming to the top of the pit.
We ran, Gods help us, we ran for the entrance- it was sealed. We were going out of our minds with terror, waiting for IT to slime its way out of the hole- devour us. -it did not come.
Jimmy stumbled into our midst -could scarcely believe it. But then a horrible grin skulked across his face, his visage contorted; he stabbed Päldr in the chest, again and again. We struck at him with sword and hammer. He did not bleed, instead a black liquid seeped from his veins- the thing in the squirming pool had not dissolved and consumed his flesh, but instead had taken control of him!
He did not go down until we had beaten him to a shape scarcely recognizable as human. Päldr died gasping on the floor, perhaps the luckiest of us.
The ground shook –I knew that, its blasphemous emissary thwarted, IT was coming for us.
I can hear it coming now- I will write later if I can.
I have shimmied up a stone shaft and perched on a small beam. The shaft, perhaps, was once attached to a privy; there was supposed to be a cathedral of some sort at ground level once. What cruelty, I can see the sunlight coming through a narrow hole, not ten feet above me, and the black ooze squelches hideously not more than twenty below me. It is getting closer all the time. Jaren slid down the shaft into its writhing form over an hour ago.
Maybe I can make it up the shaft, but I am so tired. I wish I had never laid eyes upon that pit, the horror; The Squirming Pool.
Wren Falquir’s notes:
Week Two, Day Six: I have found it! There is a book up there, in an angled shaft above me, balanced on a support beam or some such. I am certain it is the personal journal of the explorer (and treasure hunter!) Adis Aizarian. I can hardly contain my glee! If the stories are true, the journal contains the secrets to recovering treasure one could only dream of. All I have to d
Next: Alice’s Corpse Garden
Wow, sorry that was so long.
Anyone not familiar with this thread, please refer to the first post.
Okay, I think I finally have something for this, you feline rapscallion.
The Squirming Pool
Travelogue of Adis Aizarian
Village of Leesmere: Got confirmation that the ruins we were looking for exist. Should lie three days West of here. A local hedge-wizard insisted that we take his apprentice, Jimmy, with us. “You lack a manipulator of the arcane, and he needs the experience.” the wrinkled old bastard said. I hate casters… but we let him come along and help guide the pack mules. If he tries anything funny with his magic I’ll leave him alone half-way across the plain, or down the crevasse.
Two Days Out of Leesmere: Gads, what a bumbler! The boy has had his nose in books so long he can’t do anything right. It took us an hour after we made camp for the night to retrieve the mules; half an hour more for the horses. Not only did he not hobble them properly, but I am certain it was some of his fool magic that spooked them.
How I kept my calm with the boy I will never know.
Three Days Out of Leesmere: I see the crevasse not a hundred yards away; it lies like an unhealed wound in the middle of the plains. Down that hole there waits the entrance to a temple whose untold riches are said to make the Shrine of Good Fortune look like a ramshackle bawdy house, and I intend to find it. The trip to Coppervale was a waste, I know that now. The first team never returned, nor did the men who went in after them. Being third-string on a treasure hunt never felt so good; may their souls find peace. I swear I heard their screams...
I’m older now, wiser; I’ve made a name for myself. This will be different, not the leavings of some forsaken mining town but the riches of an ancient temple.
This is why we brought so much rope; a hundred feet down into the black we found the door!
It is opened! We leave our footprints in the dust of a century or more, not a soul has disturbed it in that much time. The first part of the legend holds true, now for the second; in three, down five. In three rooms and down five floors, treasure and glory will be ours.
What luck we have! Tales told in taverns by old drunks come true before our very eyes. We stand at the edge of ‘The Pit’, resting place of treasures untold, sacrificed into a hole in the ground by some forgotten cult. Pay day! The pit is at least a hundred feet across; I see that with my own eyes. The tales say it is five hundred deep or more.
First Night in the Temple: So close and yet so far. There’s a barrier around the pit, something I can’t see, but prevents our passage. The boy seems to think he can ‘dispel’ the obstacle. Whatever the barrier is, it’s making it hard to see into the pit. It may be a trick of the torchlight, but it looks like there is water in the pit; black water in the darkness.
I’ve retreated to the first floor! Writing this from a hiding place-
The pit was surrounded by a number of glyphs. A gemstone embedded at each of the four winds. My men and I don’t know magic, we know trouble. -couldn’t pay us to pry those stones loose, but that boy, THAT FOOL BOY! We were not watching- he pried loose a purple stone the size of a child’s fist. A child’s fist by my bones! My hair stood on end. -air went sour; I knew the unseen impedance was no more. Something was wrong.
I stood at the edge of the abyss and looked into the squirming pool. Feared had I that hundreds of feet of water would keep us from our prize; if only that were true.
Black and viscous, it writhes in the pit! I have seen the putrid little balls of snot called Black Pudding in my travels. I’ve killed them. This- This is a horror beyond imagining, my very own nightmares could not have perverted reality into something this unrelentingly vile. If the pit was as big as the rumors would have us believe, this oozing monstrosity occupied a space five hundred feet deep and one hundred across! Before it lurched upward and took the boy into its mass it came a scant eight feet or less from coming to the top of the pit.
We ran, Gods help us, we ran for the entrance- it was sealed. We were going out of our minds with terror, waiting for IT to slime its way out of the hole- devour us. -it did not come.
Jimmy stumbled into our midst -could scarcely believe it. But then a horrible grin skulked across his face, his visage contorted; he stabbed Päldr in the chest, again and again. We struck at him with sword and hammer. He did not bleed, instead a black liquid seeped from his veins- the thing in the squirming pool had not dissolved and consumed his flesh, but instead had taken control of him!
He did not go down until we had beaten him to a shape scarcely recognizable as human. Päldr died gasping on the floor, perhaps the luckiest of us.
The ground shook –I knew that, its blasphemous emissary thwarted, IT was coming for us.
I can hear it coming now- I will write later if I can.
I have shimmied up a stone shaft and perched on a small beam. The shaft, perhaps, was once attached to a privy; there was supposed to be a cathedral of some sort at ground level once. What cruelty, I can see the sunlight coming through a narrow hole, not ten feet above me, and the black ooze squelches hideously not more than twenty below me. It is getting closer all the time. Jaren slid down the shaft into its writhing form over an hour ago.
Maybe I can make it up the shaft, but I am so tired. I wish I had never laid eyes upon that pit, the horror; The Squirming Pool.
Wren Falquir’s notes:
Week Two, Day Six: I have found it! There is a book up there, in an angled shaft above me, balanced on a support beam or some such. I am certain it is the personal journal of the explorer (and treasure hunter!) Adis Aizarian. I can hardly contain my glee! If the stories are true, the journal contains the secrets to recovering treasure one could only dream of. All I have to d
Next: Alice’s Corpse Garden
Wow, sorry that was so long.

Anyone not familiar with this thread, please refer to the first post.
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