It was a good concept. It was hard work and they did good, but not great. I laughed when the other admiral told Chekov not to disobey orders… I half expected a joke about an old friend. A lot of dialog was forced and cliché.
The idea of a Kahn descendent was awesome. But she wasn’t anyway as awesome as I had hoped
The concept of a hacker in star trek is long sense missing
I have never liked section 31, and I really hate the idea of tuvok being part of it, but it was quick and glossed over.
I did find it funny that Parker Lewis kept loosing.
The idea of a former borg is cool, but like other ideas just aren’t well thought out. A whole crew of special butterflies is boreing…
Too many scense trying to be edgy… wow they talked about rape, and cut off someones hand… this is trek not game of thrones… the funniest moment though is when just a few second after cutting the hand off they use the teleporter…ha ha ha use the teleporter to put the bomb in stasis and handle it next week if you have too…
They did manage to get the Starfleet ‘you have to see this’
I can’t decide if the fight chorography was bad or an homage to old trek
The end kind of annoyed me… ‘hey you stole some gas, and some of you weren’t even in on it, and saving earth isn’t enough to get past that…” The idea is good but could use some corner work done…
I had hoped the emitter was for her and she was going to be deformed, the get out of death was cheesy…but it was startrek cheesy
All in all I would say for fan made 3 out of 5… it would suck if the big boys made this (but I have seen worse in theaters). If they get someone in to punch up the dialog, get some experience and maybe some editors in there...this could be a full show. I think it isn't ready for CBS but the ideas could be...