M&M 3e: Young Justice!

[Zerith]

Hopefully Echo did not just glue herself into the plain if the chirp manages to get into it to try and save the day :/
then again he his initiative might be high enough that he just runs in and grebes her before she can buckle up...

But did he over/under shoot the plain or what? >_<

Also, if wonder girl is gone that means our only real tank just vanished :/
Luckily though chirp can kinda sub for Batgirl if she left, their both acrobatic... but he is not as much as a skill monkey as her, or as good of an investigator.

...I must scare off girls or something... Why?!?
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[cassius335]

If anyone's scared off Batgirl, it's probably me.

 

[Zerith]

I make multi peragra posts becuse my character moved a few extra feeet and has acomplished no action during that time, I so I seam to scare off ppl who want lil easy to eat posts ^^; that said, why is this so dead?

No one, mainly Walking dad, was commented on the D.C-cat yet, so I don't know if it needs a redo :/

 

[Shayuri]

I'm just waiting to see if Echo survives.

 

[Walking Dad]

Sorry, I'm not on my regular computer right now.

Cat looks fine, but I actually like your art more without the 'coloration', just the lines. It looses some fine details in the process.

 

[cassius335]

I'm just waiting to see if Echo survives.

Toughness 8? She'll be fine. Solaris, on the other hand, is gonna be paste

 

[Zerith]

Not really cassius: The Chirp is going to, hopfully, bolt in grad him, and hopefully Unbuckle Echo, grab her, and then bolt right back out before impact: he might not be able to get Echo because of time restraints.

Further, we're talking about a Havoline here: they crash land, while traveling at speed, without anyone relay getting hurt.
The big owie you're looking at right now is a bruise on your head because you're standing up and not buckled in like, Echo

[MENTION=59043]Walking Dad[/MENTION]
What do you mean by coloration? all of the pictures to date are wholly black and white, but use two mediums: Pencils and a 0.7mm ball point pen.
The first finished picture of The Chirp is Pencils only (thinking back on it, I should have used my 0.2MM one for detail work :3) while The D.C.-Cat is almost entirely pen work.

Than The Dragon and The Chirp's costume picture are a combination of the two
[The Dragon is mostly pencil with ink for extra darkness and The Chip's latter picture is mostly pen with penciled shading to get the 'color' more consistent]

Here is a little quickly drawing I did before any of the above while getting to know colored pencils: it's the only colored work I've done in a long long time (except for one terrible attempt at adding golden details to a drawing I previously liked...)
[note colored pencils don't erase worth crap, so the detail gos down when using them >_<]

Anyways, I'm amusing you mean you prefer my Pen work to my Pencil work then?

 

[Walking Dad]

...
Anyways, I'm amusing you mean you prefer my Pen work to my Pencil work then?

This, almost. I would really like to see a pencil only variant of the cat.
But I have no right to critic your art at all as you a much better pencil-user than me.
I like the pictures less dark with more clean lines (like your first dragon sketch).

 

[Zerith]

To be truthful: I like Critics.
Well I should say, I like ones that have a reason, pointing out a fault in one of my drawings? I like that, helps me avoid doing so later, but just telling me something is wrong with out any kind of reference? that pisses me off fast: then again you would either have to put allot of effort into avoiding telling me any real information or use a single three word sentence

 

[Walking Dad]

Not sure in which category you put me in

I don't really like black and white drawings, but 'greyscale'. I have some difficulties to use the right technical art terms as English isn't my native language. The darkening of the cat is IMHO to dark for the hindleg and tail part as I have some trouble to clearly discern the base shape of them from the darkening pen strokes.

I hope I didn't messed up to much and it is some constructive criticism.