Metamorphosis: From Dretch to Demon Lord - Ascension Released!

[ConnorSB]

PPS: In the last line of part two, you should capitalize the "bronze" in "Bronze Citidel."

 

[sithramir]

Excellent update. You are truly an amazing writer. I look forward to the second half!

 

[BLACKDIRGE]

PPS: In the last line of part two, you should capitalize the "bronze" in "Bronze Citidel."

Nitpicker.

Just see how long it takes for you to get your Beetle Kobold God now.

Dirge

P.S. I'll have it for you in a couple of days.

 

[ConnorSB]

Awsome Socks.

 

[BLACKDIRGE]

Awsome. Amazing as ever. You just keep upping the ante, don't you. I think what I like best about your stories is that I end up rooting for everyone, however conflicted that may be. I want Pyrak to win, but I want Bel to win too. I want Hazragal to win, but I want the balor and the parelyon to win as well.

Or if not win, then do awsome things.

Great Job,
Connor

PS: Gonna update your monster thread any time soon? I'm still waiting on the Beetle Kobold God thing. But I can wait a bit more, if thats what it takes. Great Job!

Thanks, I am glad you like.

Any bets on the Pyrak Vs. Bel fight.

Dirge

P.S. Check out the rogue's gallery.

 

[Malicene]

BD don't let us wait too long between those 2 parts !!!

 

[the Rob]

my wager: Pyrak wins. He has the major advantage of easy flight, assuming his vrocks can at least slow down the Nycaloths to keep them out of the personal combat. Not only that, but the massively powerful sentient sword might be a big help too.

as always Dirge, excellent story!

 

[OurManMute]

Bump.

And a minor nitpick (sorry Blackdirge )

Why do all the demons in the bloodwar walk around with cold iron weapons? If I remember the MM correctly, devils are susceptible to silver weapons (while demons are susceptible to cold iron). Of course, cold iron sounds so much better than silver, and I guess demons don't want to look like sissies, but still...

 

[BLACKDIRGE]

Bump.

And a minor nitpick (sorry Blackdirge )

Why do all the demons in the bloodwar walk around with cold iron weapons? If I remember the MM correctly, devils are susceptible to silver weapons (while demons are susceptible to cold iron). Of course, cold iron sounds so much better than silver, and I guess demons don't want to look like sissies, but still...

No problem.

I was using the term "cold iron" more for descriptive flair than anything else. I wanted to create a vision of the huge lumbering goristroi wielding blackened cold hammered iron. It seemed more savage and better suited to their brutality and barbaraism.

But you're right. Smart demons would wield silver. Oh, well.

Dirge

 

[Thomas Hobbes]

Somehow, I can't imagine the text having the same descriptive thrill if they were silver. Silver seems, as the previous poster said, kinda wimpy. I'm sure it works fine when you're shining in plate mail with a holy symbol on your chest, but with demons....