I love this story.
Thank you so much.
I like your writing style, how you use words and your ability to uphold feeling in the alien place that Abyss is. How you can make your characters interesting and make me care for them, despite their evilness.
Oh, and I must quote something that I find very effective to crush my spirit in rpg:s.
“What mortal since the dawn of time has wanted to end up in the abyss? Your own desires are nothing, they do not hold a candle to the sleeping giant within you, and regardless of what you want, what slumbers within will awaken, and neither you nor I can halt the course of that fate.”
It really sucks when someone tells you things like that, whatever you believe in fate or not.