Metropolis - The World in Waiting (Chapter Two)

Alright, I'm throwing in my chips, gonna roll up an Elven Monk/Cleric named Cryas Elegail. He's a demolition expert who uses his magic and martial skills (along with REALLY good planning) to demolish property and remove rubble for low income citizens, and the occasional high profile client who may have heard of him through word of mouth.

Sound like anything you can use? If so, should I post the character (with a more detailed background of course) here, or would you rather me just post it in the RG thread?

Also, I'm assuming that the expanse of Metropolis contains pretty much every Deity for me to choose from?
 

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tylermalan said:
Alright, I'm throwing in my chips, gonna roll up an Elven Monk/Cleric named Cryas Elegail. He's a demolition expert who uses his magic and martial skills (along with REALLY good planning) to demolish property and remove rubble for low income citizens, and the occasional high profile client who may have heard of him through word of mouth.

Sound like anything you can use? If so, should I post the character (with a more detailed background of course) here, or would you rather me just post it in the RG thread?

Also, I'm assuming that the expanse of Metropolis contains pretty much every Deity for me to choose from?

Hmmm.....did you read all of the RG posts for flavour as well as the primer? Just for a point:

Low income citizens would probably not be able to afford magical assistance to remove property or rubble, cheap labour would be available to do a better and cleaner job (after all what level would you be?).

As for deities, no-one is yet to use a published god, which is just how I like it. Metropolis is meant to be a unique world without the 'margarine' flavour of other settings. Read the entry on the god of death, that will give you an idea.
 

Well hopefully my up and coming backstory will provide a little more reasoning to the "low income" part, mainly I just wouldn't have charged as much, but you'll see when I put up the whole thing. Do you want it here or in the RG thread?

I read some of both the RG and the Primer, but I thought you would rather not have us read the primer?
 

tylermalan said:
Well hopefully my up and coming backstory will provide a little more reasoning to the "low income" part, mainly I just wouldn't have charged as much, but you'll see when I put up the whole thing. Do you want it here or in the RG thread?

I read some of both the RG and the Primer, but I thought you would rather not have us read the primer?

Sorry, what I meant was that I don't expect you to copy exactly what everyone else has put in, I expect a lot of imagination and creation as you are building a storyline for yourself. A character that is a Fighter/Monk who worships Moradin and is an adventurer with an interesting backstory would probably not be picked. An Expert who is an accountant with an interesting backstory, now that would be picked.

I'm not interested in people designing characters that will 'mesh' well with the others, it's too fake for what I imagine Metropolis to be. I don't place obstacles in the game to solely challenge a specific class, and rely on the skill of posts to bend the story.

Example: If you are following the adventures of Jovik the Jackal, you may notice that the story was supposed to be a little different then it turned out, based solely on how the player reacted.
 

[sblock]Backstory for Cryas Elegail

Named after his grandfather on his father's side, who was a politically powerful member of the clergy (as yet undecided which one), Cryas Elegail was a quiet child, so much so that he was nearly totally inhibited from blossoming socailly. This innate calmness continued throughout adolescence until the age of 12, when his father, Fierdas, disappeared, leaving Cryas and his mother, Naebla, to fend for themselves in an already relatively dire financial situation. This started to force him to open up to be there for his mother emotionally.
According to the authorities, Fierdas had racked up some gambling debts with the local (mafia/thieves guild or whatever is appropriate) that he unfortunately could not pay off. Though the authorities expected no foul play for some reason, Cryas always did. Due to his suspicions and needing a way to help financially, Cryas went to the church that his grandfather once belonged to and, using his name, acquired a position doing manual labor and odd jobs. After working for 2 years, he began to learn more about the clerical aspects of the place he did such menial tasks in, and eventually came to know more duties than what he used to do when he first arrived.
Cryas began to investigate his father's disappearance, but for so long he turned up only dead ends. After another year, jsut as Cryas was about to step into adulthood, he was approached by a nameless man, seemingly a member of the clergy whom Cryas had never seen. The man warned him to stay out of the business he seemed so intent on digging into. Needless-to-say, this did not deter Cryas in the slightest, and he continued to press until...
Cryas was meeting his mother at a local grocery, and upon approaching, saw the building that she was in collapse. Adrenaline pumping, Cryas rushed to help, using his magic and augmented strength to clear away the rubble. Unfortunately, his mother was dead by the time he reached her. In a fit of depression, Cryas left the church, and gave up on the mystery of his father's disappearance.
Not wanting to give up his relatively recent faith in the gods, he battled with his loss of trust that they would watch over him and the people he cared about. He quickly returned to the quietness of his childhood, and turned inward, finding solace and strength within himself. He gave up continuing to progress his clerical abilites, instead choosing to further develop his physical form that began with his manual labor with the church so long ago. He supported himself doing various odd jobs in different neighborhoods until one day when he helped a local family change their residence.
Moving all their items reminded him of when he attempted to clear the rubble to save his mother, and had an epiphany about a better way to make a living that would also help him improve on his physical abilities. He went back to work demolishing buildings and removing rubble using his magic, natural weapons, and very careful planning, all the while charging the same amount as he did for odd jobs just prior, as this was also an alternate way to focus his energy into himself. He also stayed in the practice of spellcasting, as he used spells like Bull's Strength, Shatter, and Augury to help him (and to make sure that the fate that befell his mother did not befall him).
Now in his 5th year of adulthood, he has gained a small but notable reputation, and his name continues to spread to a few important people in Metropolis. He may have given up his search for his father, but his heart still burns to unravel that mystery, and though he no longer seeks, he still remembers...[/sblock]
 

Phoenix said:
Example: If you are following the adventures of Jovik the Jackal, you may notice that the story was supposed to be a little different then it turned out, based solely on how the player reacted.

It was!?! Sorry I didn't get the script ;)

Phoenix, just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying myself immensely. Perhaps later you can post how it was supposed to have turned out, till I mucked it up :p
 

Fenris said:
It was!?! Sorry I didn't get the script ;)

Phoenix, just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying myself immensely. Perhaps later you can post how it was supposed to have turned out, till I mucked it up :p

You're about to find out :D
 


tylermalan said:
[sblock]Backstory for Cryas Elegail

Named after his grandfather on his father's side, who was a politically powerful member of the clergy (as yet undecided which one), Cryas Elegail was a quiet child, so much so that he was nearly totally inhibited from blossoming socailly. This innate calmness continued throughout adolescence until the age of 12, when his father, Fierdas, disappeared, leaving Cryas and his mother, Naebla, to fend for themselves in an already relatively dire financial situation. This started to force him to open up to be there for his mother emotionally.
According to the authorities, Fierdas had racked up some gambling debts with the local (mafia/thieves guild or whatever is appropriate) that he unfortunately could not pay off. Though the authorities expected no foul play for some reason, Cryas always did. Due to his suspicions and needing a way to help financially, Cryas went to the church that his grandfather once belonged to and, using his name, acquired a position doing manual labor and odd jobs. After working for 2 years, he began to learn more about the clerical aspects of the place he did such menial tasks in, and eventually came to know more duties than what he used to do when he first arrived.
Cryas began to investigate his father's disappearance, but for so long he turned up only dead ends. After another year, jsut as Cryas was about to step into adulthood, he was approached by a nameless man, seemingly a member of the clergy whom Cryas had never seen. The man warned him to stay out of the business he seemed so intent on digging into. Needless-to-say, this did not deter Cryas in the slightest, and he continued to press until...
Cryas was meeting his mother at a local grocery, and upon approaching, saw the building that she was in collapse. Adrenaline pumping, Cryas rushed to help, using his magic and augmented strength to clear away the rubble. Unfortunately, his mother was dead by the time he reached her. In a fit of depression, Cryas left the church, and gave up on the mystery of his father's disappearance.
Not wanting to give up his relatively recent faith in the gods, he battled with his loss of trust that they would watch over him and the people he cared about. He quickly returned to the quietness of his childhood, and turned inward, finding solace and strength within himself. He gave up continuing to progress his clerical abilites, instead choosing to further develop his physical form that began with his manual labor with the church so long ago. He supported himself doing various odd jobs in different neighborhoods until one day when he helped a local family change their residence.
Moving all their items reminded him of when he attempted to clear the rubble to save his mother, and had an epiphany about a better way to make a living that would also help him improve on his physical abilities. He went back to work demolishing buildings and removing rubble using his magic, natural weapons, and very careful planning, all the while charging the same amount as he did for odd jobs just prior, as this was also an alternate way to focus his energy into himself. He also stayed in the practice of spellcasting, as he used spells like Bull's Strength, Shatter, and Augury to help him (and to make sure that the fate that befell his mother did not befall him).
Now in his 5th year of adulthood, he has gained a small but notable reputation, and his name continues to spread to a few important people in Metropolis. He may have given up his search for his father, but his heart still burns to unravel that mystery, and though he no longer seeks, he still remembers...[/sblock]

I hate to say things like this, but unfortunately your character concept just doesn't...buzz me? Though it is a workable concept, I just find that it still seems fairly basic as well as being logistically unfeasable (a 4th level character a demolitions expert though workable, seems aimed at higher levels).
 

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