[OOC] The Fifth City

[KirayaTiDrekan]

Looking over the two characters posted so far in the RG...

Scott, could you fix the formatting in your character sheet? Its hard to read as it currently stands. And take out the spoiler tags on your spell list, please. Thanks. Regarding background, the King of Terras is named Santiago, so please fix that. Also, humans don't even know the Grey Council exists, much less have a name for it, so please remove that reference. Finally, the Eldritch Knights are, in fact, simply called Eldritch Knights by the Corps of Magi.

Scotley, no issues, that if you want to name your character's father and mother, that would be helpful.

Everyone else, no hurries, but I would like to get started in about a week or so. I'll be working on more Campaign Setting info in the meantime. Requests for specific info are appreciated.

In the meantime, here is the League of Unaligned Islands (plus a smidgeon of info on Aasimars and Tieflings).

 

[Fenris]

Hey MV,
Do you want me to post characters here for vetting or in the RG? Both Queenie and I have our character 90% done.

 

[KirayaTiDrekan]

The Rogues Gallery is fine. You can just edit any issues if I find any.

Thanks.

 

[Scotley]

Looking over the two characters posted so far in the RG...

Scotley, no issues, that if you want to name your character's father and mother, that would be helpful.

In the meantime, here is the League of Unaligned Islands (plus a smidgeon of info on Aasimars and Tieflings).

Names added to background. Been enjoying the various setting pieces, good stuff!

 

[Scott DeWar]

Looking over the two characters posted so far in the RG... Scott, could you fix the formatting in your character sheet? Its hard to read as it currently stands. And take out the spoiler tags on your spell list, please. Thanks. Regarding background, the King of Terras is named Santiago, so please fix that. Also, humans don't even know the Grey Council exists, much less have a name for it, so please remove that reference. Finally, the Eldritch Knights are, in fact, simply called Eldritch Knights by the Corps of Magi.

Yeah, the formatting was totally screwed the other day, working on it. The names I mad up until the correction arrived.

 

[Fenris]

I still need to pick a last feat, but the rest of him is done and up. I did use a few names as placeholders really MV, so I can change what needs to be.

 

[KirayaTiDrekan]

Fenris, looks good to me. I like the tie to Queenie's character.

As for the placeholder name, I hadn't named any of the 13 original tribes so an isolated offshoot that still follows the old ways is fine and Herger works for me for a name.

Regarding Queenie's character's background...perfect. As soon as Queenie's character is posted in the RG we'll get started.

Lwaxy (and any other stragglers), you can jump in whenever you are feeling up to it.

Scott DeWar, one more thing (two more things really) - need a name for your character and a little more personal background - who is he, when his powers manifested...I seem to recall discussing a mentor with you at some point...that sort of thing.

 

[Scott DeWar]

right-o! on it!

 

[Scott DeWar]

History Addendum

Hey Masque Vamp, how is this?

At birth he was given a name, a name of his family, but that was forgotten as his powers manifested at the age of 7 when he caught a field on fire where he and his father were looking to till after letting it fallow for a year. At the very least he cleared the brush out without his father toiling over a flint and steel. As a plus, they were alone, no one saw them, So he was able to be brought home with a story of a lightning strike from a freak storm. though the thought of the boy speaking a word and fire from his finger, well, and where did he hear that word? Was it in the tavern the other night? Those dark clad men in the corner speaking low? Maybe he heard them when he wandered the tavern floor.

The same men were found at the tavern that night, His father ad he brought themselves after steeling their mettle and approaching the strangers. His father interrupted ad what was hoped to be an opportune moment with the clearing of his throat. The strangers listened attentively and the all went to a room. That night his family were spirited away and he was inducted into the secret order of magi, and was given a new name to a new family. Marcus Stiles XIII was born.

Student Neuvoux for 7 years then apprentice neuvoux the first year, freshman, then sophomore, Junior and now Graduated Senior Apprentice. Along the way he learned the laws of the king and would use his knowledge and logic to investigate possible infractions of the law of magi. He was given the side title of junior investigative Barrister as well.

 

[KirayaTiDrekan]

Looks good to me.