Player's Guide to the Corrlands - feedback

Torx

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I'm looking for feedback, suggestions, and the like for a guide I made for players in my home-brewed world. I've made a PDF that includes all the information that a player would need in this world. I left out tons of info that they do not need, and some of this is a little bit of misinformation (example, the history is not complex, complete, or completely accurate).

NOTE: This is not a d20 publication - it will not be published - it is merely being posted here for feedback - the feats section is entirely plagiarized, it is more the list of feats I allow in gaming all put together.

Give me thoughts, criticisms, and issues [balance]

Player's Guide to the Corrlands PDF 1.5MB

And here are two maps (for reference) - the first is an old one, that shows the layout of the land. I'm redoing it - and the 2nd shows the work in progress.

Old Map 33KB
New Unfinished Map 232KB

FINAL NOTE: I posted this on both the Plots & Places and House Rules forums, as there is a bit of crossover - I apologize for the bandwidth ;)
 
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