Not too bad; I like it, overall.
- I like your Cure Disease alterations. I just might adapt something like that to my games....
- Also cool is your choice on sticking within a single pantheon for your game; it helps to create and maintain themes in the game's elements such as culture, npc identities, etc.
- I'm not sure that I care for the banned spell list. The limits you've imposed is not exactly new; I've seen other people nerfing utility spells. It would irritate the crap out of me as a player...but...as a critique of your stuff, at least it is consistent and you've explained your reasoning well.
- I really don't care for the 'Buff Spell'-held-til-discharged rule. Not only could a low-level caster with either Craft Wond. Item, Scribe Scroll, or Brew Potion take advantage of the Insta-Power-Up...but, I agree with a previous statement of taking away from players' creative work on surprising an opponent.
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