RECRUITING: Fall of the 14th Kingdom

[Arkhandus]

Skills
Bluff +5 (=2+3+0)
Concentration +5 (=1+4+0)
Diplomacy +7 (=4+3+0)
Gather Information +5 (=2+3+0)
Spellcraft +5 (=4+1+0)

Looks like you still have 3 skill points left to spend. Probably throw them into Bluff, Concentration, and/or Gather Information?

Magic
Caster Level: 1
Spells per day: 8 (5 + 3 bonus) 0 level, 4 (3+1 bonus) 1st level
Domains:
Lvl 0 Spells: Detect magic, Read magic, Light, Mage hand.
Lvl 1 Spells: Magic missile, sleep

Looks fine, but are you sure you don't want a 0-level combat spell of some sort, like Acid Splash, Daze, Disrupt Undead, or Ray of Frost? You get a lot of 0-level spells per day, after all. Read Magic or Detect Magic are the most likely wait-until-later candidates. Also, I think Prestidigitation would be handy to a noblewoman for its convenience value. Just mentioning.

The background and such looks fine. Anything in particular Alyssa was looking for when going off to adventure? Fame? Fortune? Something else?

 

[Arkhandus]

Yes, definitely still open. I'm actually still looking for a 6th player, too, since I know that at least 1-2 of the current PCs won't be able to show up all the time. I'm getting to your PC submission next.

 

[Rythlas]

Yes, definitely still open. I'm actually still looking for a 6th player, too, since I know that at least 1-2 of the current PCs won't be able to show up all the time. I'm getting to your PC submission next.

Alright, cool.

 

[Arkhandus]

Str: 16+3
Dex: 13+1
Con: 14+2
Int: 14+2
Wis: 12+1
Cha: 9-1

No problems here, though I'd suggest making the Dexterity 14 and the Charisma 8, unless you're planning on giving him some social skills and a Charisma boost at some later level. Fighters don't have any social skills as class skills (read: cheap skills) though, since they're all about kickin' butt and lookin' for butts that need kickin'.

HP: 12
AC: 15 (+1 Dex, +0 Size, +4 Armor, +0 Shield)
Init: +1
Speed: 30 feet
BAB: +1
Mel: +5
Rng: +2
Fort: +4
Refl: +1
Will: +1

Your melee attack bonus should be +4, since it's only +5 when using the Greatsword. Just mentioning.

Skills
Climb +7 (=4+3+0)
Intimidate +3 (=4+(-1)+0)
Jump +7 (=4+3+0)
Ride +5 (=4+1+0)
Swim +7 (=4+3+0)

Handle Animal +3 (=4+(-1)+0)

Looks like you spent 4 skill points too many. Fighter = 2 sp/level, Human = +1/level, 14 Int = +2/level, =5/level, x4 at 1st, for 20 points at 1st-level. Might just want to reduce your rank by 2 in Ride and Handle Animal, or Jump and Handle Animal, or something.

 

[Rythlas]

No problems here, though I'd suggest making the Dexterity 14 and the Charisma 8, unless you're planning on giving him some social skills and a Charisma boost at some later level. Fighters don't have any social skills as class skills (read: cheap skills) though, since they're all about kickin' butt and lookin' for butts that need kickin'.

Your melee attack bonus should be +4, since it's only +5 when using the Greatsword. Just mentioning.

Looks like you spent 4 skill points too many. Fighter = 2 sp/level, Human = +1/level, 14 Int = +2/level, =5/level, x4 at 1st, for 20 points at 1st-level. Might just want to reduce your rank by 2 in Ride and Handle Animal, or Jump and Handle Animal, or something.

Alright, I adjusted my dex and chr, and the mab must have been typo, and fixed my skills. ^^

 

[Arkhandus]

Don't forget to update your AC, Initiative, Reflex save, and Dex-based skills, since the Dex modifier increased.

Also, apply the armor check penalty for Scalemail armor to the appropriate skills (Climb, Jump, etc., and double for Swim).

I still have to double-check everyone's gear to see if they spent enough or too much GP. You get the average for your class in T13K; so fighters get 150 GP to start with, the rogue/cleric gets 130 GP, the bard and dragon shaman each get 120 GP, the sorcerer gets 80 GP, and so on.

And I miscounted; we've actually got 6 people now in total. Plus possibly Evandariel or someone else. So we're effectively full now, pending a response by Evandariel or the other maybe-players.

 

[Sayokojen]

Looks like you still have 3 skill points left to spend. Probably throw them into Bluff, Concentration, and/or Gather Information?

Oops. I transposed the stat and the ranks for concentration, so actually I was supposed to have 4 ranks of concentration with a +1 con bonus.

Looks fine, but are you sure you don't want a 0-level combat spell of some sort, like Acid Splash, Daze, Disrupt Undead, or Ray of Frost? You get a lot of 0-level spells per day, after all. Read Magic or Detect Magic are the most likely wait-until-later candidates. Also, I think Prestidigitation would be handy to a noblewoman for its convenience value. Just mentioning.

Yeah, I'll take Ray of frost and will drop read magic.

I can take prestidigitation istead of mage hand. They're pretty similar except presitidigitation has a wider variety of uses (although MH lets you lift a slightly heavier amount). Prest would have more RP uses, which is what I was going for anyway.

The background and such looks fine. Anything in particular Alyssa was looking for when going off to adventure? Fame? Fortune? Something else?

Some excitement, a chance to get away from the more tedious aspects of societal life for a while. She still has a bit of delusions of grandeur and a chip on her shoulder for those who thought they could keep her cooped up and so she would love to earn some fame and respect as well. If she had to choose between being rich, powerful, or famous, she'd choose famous (then powerful).

 

[Rythlas]

And I miscounted; we've actually got 6 people now in total. Plus possibly Evandariel or someone else. So we're effectively full now, pending a response by Evandariel or the other maybe-players.

BLAH.

I had my character sheet submitted for my rogue like, 3 days ago on the other forum with necro, and I've been talking with Dragon. He suggested I rerolled something else because you guys already had a rogue. ;_; That's why it took longer for me to get mine in.

Bawwww.

 

[Dragonwriter]

Actually, I didn't close the forum on WotC, I just posted that I closed the OpenRPG Room I opened last night...
Ark, seeing as you seem to have a full house now, do you want me to close that thread?

 

[Arkhandus]

Huh? I didn't say you were out, Rythlas. You ARE the sixth player. You're on the first post's list of PCs.

I was saying that I'm not accepting any further PCs except for the possible ones Evandariel or Firehorse might make if they decide to drop in at some point.


Dragonwriter -
Go ahead and post in the other thread that we're not accepting any more players for now. But depending on if people stick around, we may or may not be recruiting again later.